Brazen Heart

Of love there is no antidote nor cure,
A brazen heart knows nothing of the hand,
That guides this Cupid arrow fair and pure,
And pierces through with art that soul can stand.
Of choice the soul knows nothing to begin,
As seeds that scatter aimlessly on clay,
Some grow and flourish unbeknown to him,
That stalks the Earth oblivious and grey.
Confounded he, who is awakened so,
From anaesthetic binding dark as night, 
When true love strikes and soul begins to glow,
He see’s a Universe that’s blazing bright.

And brazen heart is smelted down to flesh,
And nourished through with all of loves relish.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/12/2010 5:28:00 AM
As the song goes, "True love finally struck like lightning from the sky." How well you describe the way love changes a person's life, David. Compelling writing once again! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2010 5:48:00 PM
You are a good writer David. I enjoy all the journeys you take us on. David B
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic. A masterfully done sonnet...makes the reader feel the myriad of emotions that only love can make one feel. Thanks so much for sharing! God Bless~Mary
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Date: 3/4/2010 2:36:00 PM
How very beautiful..awesome!Charma
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Date: 3/4/2010 12:26:00 AM
Wow David. Great write... Farah
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:17:00 AM
Nice one Davis Congrats on your recent contest success .Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:35:00 PM
Dear David, This is the kind of poem that one savors and longs to read again and again. Your lines: "When true love strikes and soul begins to glow, He sees a Universe that’s blazing bright." are filled with such veracity and expressed with illuminating glory! Truly a breathtaking work of art to be cherished. Thank you for making my night! Love, Connie
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Date: 3/2/2010 3:56:00 PM
A beautiful Sonnet, David!! Goes to my favs. I enjoyed this very much. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/2/2010 3:01:00 PM
Beautifully stated, much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing this. ;)
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:15:00 AM
Great Sonnet. I especially enjoyed the lines eleven and twelve. Keep the creative pen flowing with romance to delight the readeers...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 3/2/2010 6:58:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet David .. going to make it a new fav for me .. I hope my Enmeshed poem so hot..hot..hot ..inspired this "beauty" from u... we all feed off each others poetry.. I just luv it... "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/2/2010 4:36:00 AM
Really a lovely sonnet, David! And thank you for your comment...Keep your pen flowing...Gert
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:43:00 PM
David a passionate sonnet with excellent meter! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:03:00 PM
o what a lovely sonnet! great work! definitely a fav! :D
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