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Brave

Better to try than to never know Relinquishing comfort for an unknown gain Acknowledging what it takes to grow Valiant within torrents of rain Emboldened in the midst of pain 9-23-2023 Try a Quincrosticain! Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 10/9/2023 7:41:00 PM
Dear Juliet, a potent poem, the last line is especially striking. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/9/2023 7:30:00 AM
Lots of imagery in a few words Juliet - very nice! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/9/2023 2:08:00 AM
"Better to try than to never know" - Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/8/2023 7:27:00 PM
Juliet, CONGRATS on your win with this excellent definition/description of "brave." Janice
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Date: 10/8/2023 11:13:00 AM
I love your definition of BRAVE here. Wish you had bolded the letters of each first letter per line. I'd have given it second place. Congrats on a pedestal win.
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Date: 9/24/2023 2:12:00 AM
You did this form very well.. good idea to use brave and nice rhymes also... Good luck in the contest dear poet..
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Date: 9/23/2023 11:26:00 PM
This is powerfully written - I like it! Sure winner :)
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Date: 9/23/2023 9:44:00 PM
Wisdom, and yes often wisdom grows from pain, lovely poem.
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Date: 9/23/2023 9:39:00 PM
This is cool Love the concept.
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