Brave

Better to try than to never know
Relinquishing comfort for an unknown gain
Acknowledging what it takes to grow
Valiant within torrents of rain
Emboldened in the midst of pain

9-23-2023
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Ashley Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:41 PM
Dear Juliet, a potent poem, the last line is especially striking. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Lots of imagery in a few words Juliet - very nice! Congratulations! :)
Alex Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 2:08 AM
"Better to try than to never know" - Great work. Congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Juliet, CONGRATS on your win with this excellent definition/description of "brave." Janice
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 11:13 AM
I love your definition of BRAVE here. Wish you had bolded the letters of each first letter per line. I'd have given it second place. Congrats on a pedestal win.
One Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 2:12 AM
You did this form very well.. good idea to use brave and nice rhymes also... Good luck in the contest dear poet..
Vaso Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 9:44 PM
Wisdom, and yes often wisdom grows from pain, lovely poem.
Jones Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 9:39 PM
This is cool Love the concept.
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