Bravado

I used to be brave,
But that was just carelessness.
Now, I fear death you know, 
the blackness beyond the light.
My child and discovery,
Going hand in hand.
She’s two now,
And is always smiling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 10:25 AM
We want to grab life for all its worth when holding the hand of a child! I can almost hear you gulp as you think of her.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:54 AM
Ah, a two-year-old. Nothing cuter in the whole world unless it is twin two-year-olds. I am sending love to both of you, and her mother, thinking of how wonderful your life is now. Live every minute you can through her eyes; she sees more than we ever could, socialized like we are. "always smiling" even upon awakening I dare guess.
Teagan Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 12:38 AM
I love this, David!
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 6:00 PM
so thoughtful this is. I love the way you so deeply reflect with brevity.
Callus Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:43 AM
One needs not write page long poems in order to pass on a message or emotions, David; you ably manage that with economy of words. The comparison/contrast between you and your child makes a lot of sense. Regards // paul
Horsman Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Wow, love this meaningful poem, so deep, and the message is powerful..
Devonshire Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Children don't usually have the same fears we do, and their innocence allows them to enjoy life more. Enjoy your time with your little girl. You are still brave, David. Most people have fears about death. For some, faith helps to alleviate the fears. Your poem is quite profound and understated. Excellent!
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