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branches bare of leaves

branches bare of leaves but persimmons still cling tight... jay calls in delight
seasonal word...persimmon For the Strict Haiku contest... Barbara Gorelick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2012 6:40:00 PM
Good job on your superb write Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:01:00 PM
this is so beautiful, Barbara. Glad to see it again and a winner in this contest. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/25/2012 9:37:00 AM
Well done Barbara. Congratulations
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest BG. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/13/2011 9:51:00 AM
If the frost has fallen they will be ripe for picking..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2011 2:41:00 PM
those Jays are greedy birds i wonder if birds pucker? [just the thought of persimmons makes my mouth dry!] Congrad's Light & love
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Date: 11/11/2011 11:53:00 AM
What a lovely scene this was! I could so imagine those birds happy with those persimmons on the branches, very nice contrast between the bare branch and persimmons :) Congrats on your win, BG!
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Date: 11/11/2011 10:50:00 AM
Very nice imagery here Barbara.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/11/2011 7:58:00 AM
Barbara, congratulations on your win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 11/11/2011 1:13:00 AM
B;G;.~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/10/2011 8:46:00 PM
Congrats BG on a wonderful win with these fascinating words luv..
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Date: 11/10/2011 8:19:00 PM
yours was very pretty and happy. Congrats on your win, Barbara
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Date: 11/10/2011 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charles
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Date: 11/10/2011 2:17:00 PM
love the choice of fruit, Barbara. Such a lovely scene with the singing blue jay too. Congrats. Gwendolen
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Date: 11/10/2011 1:32:00 PM
This brings a smile again...I was sure it would do well! Congratulations, Barbara!
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Date: 11/2/2011 8:46:00 PM
This is so lovely. I would rate it high!
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Date: 11/2/2011 1:21:00 PM
Nice use of imagery in this poem. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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Date: 11/1/2011 5:49:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Charles' contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 6:50:00 PM
oh, I love this one!! and mmmm...hope those persimmons are fuyus....I love to eat those out of the hand! What a joyful poem, great for the contest! Good luck!!
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Date: 10/31/2011 10:35:00 AM
Is persimmon a favourite of women, or do you prefer men lemon?
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Date: 10/31/2011 9:47:00 AM
Lovely haiku, Barbara. Many congrats on your wins too : )
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