Brainstorm

BRAINSTORM

      Quiet brain quite norm hit by groaning gust
       bursting in cyclonic storm of betrayal and lies.
        Me diffused confused shattered battered 
        in whirl pool of vortex of agony and anxiety.
         Fractured brain felt fervor of forest fire
          caused by frictional force of emotional injury.
                              
           My radiant refulgent brain waves turned seismic shock waves.
          Brain seemed to slumber, senses sank in stupor to be swept away,
         Consciousness smothered, failed to shun dismal. 
        I was devastated in destructive tornado thrashing brain in turmoil.
        Dense deep bruises, severe scars salient prominent
       showing permanent damage probably not to be cured.

      Yet Time is the best healer on slow recovery.
       Storm subsided stopped bringing sullen brain back in normal form.     
        Mental strength refreshed, brain became cool and calm.
          Waiting for new passion and compassion.
   
  10/16/18
                      Fourth Place
  'Brainstorm' Contest by John Hamilton

     First Place
   ' No 510 Contest ' by Brian Strand
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Gauthier Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 6:25 AM
Congrats on your wink Anisha. Well done.
Dutta Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 9:54 AM
Thanks Line. Love.
Neumann Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 1:45 AM
Time and hope. Congratulations on your win, Kai
Dutta Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 2:00 AM
Thamks kai for visit n appreciation
May Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 7:55 AM
So many storms brew within the vortex of the mind..Congrats on your win Anisha..
Dutta Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Thanks n Warm Wishes
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:42 AM
- You're absolutely right, Anisha ... the time is the best healer on slow recovery, although some will always live with it :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dutta Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 12:34 PM
Thanks Sunshine for your nice comment. Love
Hamilton Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Congrats Anisha for another fine placement in my contest!
Mitra Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Wow ..you put so much delicate details...a brainy creation indeed. Loved the flow and the ending..as if a storm has just ended
Dutta Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thanks Debjani. Blessing
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