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Brainstorm

BRAINSTORM Quiet brain quite norm hit by groaning gust bursting in cyclonic storm of betrayal and lies. Me diffused confused shattered battered in whirl pool of vortex of agony and anxiety. Fractured brain felt fervor of forest fire caused by frictional force of emotional injury. My radiant refulgent brain waves turned seismic shock waves. Brain seemed to slumber, senses sank in stupor to be swept away, Consciousness smothered, failed to shun dismal. I was devastated in destructive tornado thrashing brain in turmoil. Dense deep bruises, severe scars salient prominent showing permanent damage probably not to be cured. Yet Time is the best healer on slow recovery. Storm subsided stopped bringing sullen brain back in normal form. Mental strength refreshed, brain became cool and calm. Waiting for new passion and compassion. 10/16/18 Fourth Place 'Brainstorm' Contest by John Hamilton First Place ' No 510 Contest ' by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/29/2018 6:25:00 AM
Congrats on your wink Anisha. Well done.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/29/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Line. Love.
Date: 10/29/2018 1:45:00 AM
Time and hope. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/29/2018 2:00:00 AM
Thamks kai for visit n appreciation
Date: 10/26/2018 7:55:00 AM
So many storms brew within the vortex of the mind..Congrats on your win Anisha..
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/26/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thanks n Warm Wishes
Date: 10/26/2018 3:42:00 AM
- You're absolutely right, Anisha ... the time is the best healer on slow recovery, although some will always live with it :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2018 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Sunshine for your nice comment. Love
Date: 10/25/2018 1:06:00 PM
Congrats Anisha for another fine placement in my contest!
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Date: 10/25/2018 11:15:00 AM
Wow ..you put so much delicate details...a brainy creation indeed. Loved the flow and the ending..as if a storm has just ended
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/25/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thanks Debjani. Blessing

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