Brainstorm

A melancholy thought, travelling at the speed of light Moves through the universe of the mind Seeking to find answers Dealing with matters of the heart This storm of emotions, caused by heartache Seeks to escape from the mind Like an electron from an atom, But then explodes into the deepest realms of the mind The thought, still moving through the storm Settles in the dimension of long term memory And there it lays dormant, beside The sphere of emotionally charged memories -- 10-12-18 Brainstorm Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/28/2018 6:34:00 AM

Excellent and nice description of brainstorm. Congrats on your win my friend. Enjoyed reading it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2018 1:34:00 AM

i could never even attempt this particular challenge. I see you got a win. Big congrats to you,my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2018 3:33:00 AM

- CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN, JOSEPH :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/25/2018 1:07:00 PM

Well done Joseph, congrats on another fine placement!

Joseph May
Date: 10/26/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thank you for my placement John

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/25/2018 8:31:00 AM

This is a nice description of brainstorm, Joseph:) thanks for my placement in your palindrome contest:)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/23/2018 2:44:00 PM

"seeks to escape from the mind...but then explodes into the deepest realms." Exactly right! Good luck in the contest, Joseph.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/20/2018 10:30:00 PM

Yes Joseph. That's the Brain storm. All the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2018 1:06:00 PM

- Really a melancholy brainstorm, Joseph - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/16/2018 7:04:00 PM

Great poetic feat about Brainstorms, Joseph. I wish you well in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2018 3:56:00 PM

good one. it captures the feeling of a "storm" I am really befuddled by this challenge. Hoping something comes to me!!

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/14/2018 9:57:00 AM

I'm caught in your Brainstorm, Joseph...very storm brainy of you...great write my friend...love & storms...^WW^

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2018 3:56:00 PM

fabulous free verse Joseph I think I'll give the contest a miss I can't think of anything to write unless I have a brainstorm!:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/12/2018 3:23:00 PM

Wow! This is amazing! You write free verse so well. This looks like a winner :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/12/2018 10:37:00 AM

Excellent poem Joseph..a walk in the storm of melancholy thoughts..I liked the ending as well. Best for a win.