Brain Sodomy

Thanks to his new lobotomy 
Surgeons tool did brain sodomy
He no longer drools
Still acts a fool
Patient thinks he won the lottery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 11:17 AM
A powerful write. Have a very blessed/fun day writing away............
Jones Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 11:47 AM
Thanks for reading Paula!
Rodgers Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 7:59 AM
Dear Karen, Oh what bold, fearless humor you do so well. You turn something frightening into something artful and strangely triumphant. Being a counselor and knowing some individuals who have severe, hard-to-treat depression, who go for electric shock. It is not my preferred treatment. There are many other alternatives. A striking, memorable write. Blessings, Daniel
Jones Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 8:18 AM
Wow hats off to you for being a counselor Daniel! You have a kind heart to lend with your ear! Thanks for sharing!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 3:58 AM
What was the inspiration for this one? Seems dark. Interesting though.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 7:40 PM
Wow! Very scary!
Jones Avatar
February 26, 2026 at 4:01 AM
When I was hospitalized I saw a woman who was repeatedly having electric shock treatment to her brain! That was terrifying to me. I knew that I didn’t need or want that!
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