Brain Drain

I shook my head, it rattled, all the words fell out on a blank page.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/19/2023 7:17:00 PM

A great statement. I think genius works that way.

Deb M

Date: 11/19/2023 3:20:00 PM

Hehe…. funny one john! Better words than sawdust! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/19/2023 2:53:00 PM

a delightful Monoku, John! Sometimes when I shake my head words fall out of my mouth that probably shouldn't :-) Enjoyed your poem...have a splendid evening, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 11/19/2023 1:14:00 PM

It looks like they even fell into the right order.

Tom Woody

Date: 11/19/2023 12:40:00 PM

Better words than body parts I always say...

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/19/2023 12:32:00 PM

ha! as good a description of writing poetry as i've seen, john...