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Brain Control

Some people don't give a flip About what passes their lip They really should refrain From by-passing their brain. written July 8, 2021

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Date: 7/8/2021 3:04:00 PM

This one will surely "sting" to some! Great job, Keep going Milt!!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/8/2021 4:18:00 PM

Well, it's just generally true, Anselmo, not pointed to anyone in particular. Even I need to watch what passes my lip from time to time.

Date: 7/8/2021 2:59:00 PM

So funny, two in a row, Milton, way to go, go go!!...ab

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/8/2021 4:19:00 PM

Thanks, Anselmo. I appreciate your comment.

Date: 7/8/2021 2:27:00 PM

Ain’t that the truth. Nicely put. Terry

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/8/2021 4:20:00 PM

Thanks, Terry. It is pretty much the truth!

Date: 7/8/2021 2:07:00 PM

and give their big mouth a new zip ... there u go a limerick collab lol:-) hugs jan xx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/8/2021 4:22:00 PM

Hey Jan, you write a second stanza and I'll add it with credit to you! Glad you like it. I like the verb "to zip." Lots of possibilities.