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Sponsor's Name ; Nette Onclaud                               
Contest Name   ; Six And Seven                       
Date Posted      ;  April 21  Year 2026                          
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Bracelet Of Stars

I glimpse around a jeweller’s plush boutique,
for token of affection, silver star-studded bracelet,
I’d shower diamonds on my treasured darling, 
whose lambent aura sets my heart ablaze,
with her blissful smile and gleaming eyes,
band of ornaments from me starstruck beau
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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April 22, 2026 at 12:41 PM
Lovely This is so tender and well described. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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April 22, 2026 at 5:14 AM
Apparently, this one is for a contest, and if so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 5:43 AM
I can’t thank you enough, Sara, for your constructive and extremely helpful words. Best of luck to you, Howard
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April 21, 2026 at 10:34 PM
This is sweet and romantic, Howard. The title choices were so interesting, weren't they!
Kerr Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 2:29 AM
You are so kind, Andrea. I cherish your comments. Have to agree title choices are interesting and should briing out the best in poets, Howard
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