Boys In School

BOYS   IN   SCHOOL

Boys in school - I sympathise with them 
They must reorganize their brain stem
They are made to sit in rows
And try to see what each  one knows

We must try to work quietly
Behave always with propriety
No  chasing after  our  neighbour 
Or throwing small objects at the door
Like erasers,  ( ideal for throwing)
We must keep our minds a-growing

No shouting or indeed talking loudly
Write neatly, do all our work proudly.
Do exactly  what  teacher tells you
And be ashamed of that eraser you threw

Let’s understand their predicament.
This is a girls’ environment  
Obviously girls  love it because  as a rule 
Even in free time they like to  play “school”
Ever seen  a  boy  play “school”?  No.
Far from the building’s where he wants to go

There are boy wild seeds to be sown.
Where is the training for him to “stand alone”?
And   “do it his way” like Sinatra?
He’d be better off in a place like Sumatra,
Where the rubber grows for erasers
And the world is full  of pursued and chasers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/18/2010 6:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem very much, those boys and erasers, yes, I recall getting a few erasers to the back of my head in school, while I sat there the picture of an angel ~~
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Date: 12/18/2010 4:30:00 AM
The last four lines I loved the most, Sydney. Nice wit and humor in it.
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