Boy Running In the Rain

His face swinging from ear to ear
A bemused smile lighting up
           His gander gait
Under the burlap mop
                                      Who’s looking at me
Why is everyone looking at my legs
  
       His mother telling him to be back this summer
Before the green peacocks turn to blue
 
Droplets big as his nightshade eyes bursting at each swan step
 
Boy on an errand
 
The stealthy guilt-ridden leaves of the linden
Motionless in the sudden metallic green flood
 
Boy still running in the rain
                                      How old am I
As old as the linden when it was eight
Where are the caterwauling magpies this day
None to mock me in my gait
 
He thinks he’s running in the still hot rain
But the cars and trucks along the road shower
   In their mindless manic main
              
Wait till you see my master drive me proud    
Over the bridges under high-volting cables
My throat loosening up in coughs and curses
The mud drained from my tired gables
 
Boy still keeps running in the rain
 
When will the summer end
When the cotton sky turns to lead
 
Or when the boy stops running in the rain   
 
 
© T. Wignesan July 15, 2011 - Paris 
(First appeared in Alongstoryshort site on August 4, 2011.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/21/2013 8:17:00 PM
T Wignesan, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA**
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Date: 4/22/2013 1:26:00 AM
Thanks ever so much Destroyer LINDA! Curious! I did, for once! How didya know? You're really too kind. The honour is ALL MINE! I must check your page, I tell myself, but my excuse: I've got a 1000 books to read and 10 times as much to write and a trillion times less in time. Yet I will. Sleep tight! EGW - Wignesan
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