Boy Am I Hungry

Battle of the bulge
From greesy foods love to divulge
Over lips and through the gums
Love handles now do come
When will I learn not to indulge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 2:59 AM
Quite humorous and though provoking poem. Good luck in the contest. read mine for the solution.
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May 22, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Enjoyed this one. Has me smiling. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good weekend my friend. Karen
Gorelick Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 12:16 PM
If you figure it out ..let me know. Great write! BG
Green Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 11:17 AM
Good one! Love handles- great aren't they? LOL!
Flach Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 9:57 AM
A lesson we could all learn, Katherine. Good luck in the contest. Joe
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