Boxers

The FIRST round

of the fight

began evenly

matched.

But then, that look...

THAT LOOK

knocked

me

out.

desirelovelustsensualfree verse

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Jan Allison

February 20, 2015 at 9:38 AM

I was disappointed at the end ... my mind also took me to boxer shorts lol - clever title it pulled me in:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

February 20, 2015 at 11:56 AM

Just the way my mind works lol - I enjoyed the poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nikkia Roberts

February 20, 2015 at 11:41 AM

Allow your "disappointment" to motivate your own creative expression, Jan. Art has no path, no mold to follow. It is you, dear reader, who must not peek behind the doors of "titles"...but open yourself to fly in the sky of endless possibility....and to simply enjoy the ride. ;) Blessings!

Njeri Hunjeri

February 20, 2015 at 9:35 AM

Ok Nikkia I think your poem has a hidden meaning:) is it about boxers, boxing or box. I need to stop myself from thinking toooooo much

Nikkia Roberts

February 20, 2015 at 11:43 AM

Never stop yourself from thinking. Your brain is your second set of lungs....the way you breathe, exist. Think on, Njeri, because this poem has many innuendos tucked within. However you interpret it, then so it is. :) Have fun!

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