Box Of Litted Wishes

Many years I kept you in box
Box of good memories that knocks
Birthdays come alive
Like roses in five
Candles I lit, my love that rocks!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 8:54 PM
Your poem reminds me of my own treasured boxes of loved ones passed. They hold pieces of jewelry given to me and letters only I can see. Bottles of empty perfume, old times at the lake, pictures of promises I didn't break. I would love to make three copies of this poem and tape each to the outside of my own 3 boxes. Your poem was touching and heartfelt. I truly loved it.
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April 17, 2023 at 9:34 PM
You're so kind Marikate. Teachers value life more than just life itself.
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