Boundless Lawlessness

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I've generally battled vulnerability. I'm not even close to what I ought to be. I notice myself faltering in the water alike a log. Mr. Culpability, can you hear my pathetic blog. I've been in anguish because of my apathy. I don't notice whether I mend and gain some theory. I'm similar to a plane colliding with the Earth. Mr. Obligation, temper me in going girth. My transgression was my erroneous gloss. I've needed to stumble rather than be in progress. I've been oppressed by lethargy for longer. I'm tired of hearing "Morons" again and over. Ineptitude won't sustain the edge unexpectedly. Flightiness won't ever again hold the mastery. 1st place contest winner Written: August 7, 2021 A Brian Strand 4 to 14 line Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/8/2021 5:25:00 AM

A profound read, the poem speaks of one blunder after another. A condition that besets everyone from time to time...Delice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/8/2021 2:36:00 AM

A great lament. Before we absolve ourselves with mea culpa, things can only get worse.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2021 11:30:00 AM

Creative work you have penned. Seems like a saw a contest about couplets and if this is for the contest I believe it to be a good contender. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/7/2021 12:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara; your kind words are so motivating for me. I didn't actually craft the poem for a contest, but I won't hesitate if any opportunity comes up. Blessings and kindest wishes.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/7/2021 10:28:00 AM

How much such a soliloquy needed in a still time, and profound silence.. How much we need to bare our souls to our inner Selves.. and see into our beauty and flaws.. So wonderful is the flow of your thoughts! So beautiful is the tone of your poetry! God bless you, Lasaad.. A great pleasure to read! My deepest regards and blessings.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/7/2021 12:43:00 PM

Greetings, Besma! Your insightful and profound remarks clearly explain the purpose of this poem; it's always fascinating to reflect on ourselves to improve in the future. Thank you very much for your wise and charming comments—best wishes and blessings to you.