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Boudoir Antics

He was poetically intolerant, she thought herself an Emily writing sonnets 'how do I love...' he indulged her feeble whimsies in light of other finessed talents, essentially, larks amidst boudoir's uncommonly emboldened expertise

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Anthony Mark

Date: 10/23/2016 2:03:00 AM

Feels perfectly cold, she the wannabe writer , he the dominant ignorant, " feeble whimsies" says it all, so sex is the only place for mutuality.....good clever piece ...everyone wants to be taken seriously ...Ian x

Robert Warlov

Date: 10/22/2016 5:06:00 PM

Claims of boudoir expertise are always suspect. ;-)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/22/2016 4:23:00 PM

I can see no fault in this marvellous piece of poetry. A wonderful read. Thank You.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/22/2016 9:53:00 AM

Nothing like a good argument to spark some hot romance:) Another great write, Paloma.

David Mohn

Date: 10/21/2016 5:31:00 PM

smartly written Paloma…fabulous!

Paloma P
Date: 10/22/2016 5:05:00 AM

Thanks very much David!

Chris Green

Date: 10/21/2016 3:42:00 PM

Classics clash and the boudoir ignites. Only in poetry can the flames be fanned by such a creative imagination. This was top shelf Paloma.

Paloma P
Date: 10/22/2016 5:05:00 AM

Top shelf, what I was drinking last night. :) Thanks Chris.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/21/2016 1:46:00 PM

A very witty and enlightening poem, Paloma. Ain't it funny how two people can have a different perception of what love is. Therein causes boudoir antics. Exquisitely done. As for the Romantic Warrior name, lifted from Return to Forever, a classic fusion band's album. I am lovingly romantic to the righteous, and an implacable warrior against the wicked. It expresses my duality the way I see myself. Lovely poem. Many blessings to you, dear lady. Much L & P.

Paloma P
Date: 10/22/2016 5:04:00 AM

I was kidding you about the name, but thanks for clarifying, I just had a listen, they're really good. Thanks for your glowing review and turning me on to the music. :)