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Bottomless Depth

After a much needed rainy night,
the morning sun looked bright and new.
My day was off to a great start,
now off to work singing my favorite song.
The work day went by fast,
it seemed to be over before it started.
At home a hot bath was waiting,
hot water with lots of bubbles.
The phone was ringing,
as I was walking into my apartment.
A cheerful hello I gave,
only to get dead silence.
Words came but not words I wanted to hear
,
your dad is in the hospital my dear.
My heart sank deep,
deep into the Bottomless Depth of my spirit.
Learning he was dying was not what I wanted to hear,
I am on my way~I am on my way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/26/2023 4:44:00 AM
Wonderful write, Paula:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2023 10:02:00 AM
Your note was a wonderful surprise. I have been off the computer for 3 weeks. Thank You for your note, for your congratulations and for your placement. Glad you enjoyed my write. It was fun to write. Have a blessed day/week writing away............
Date: 9/4/2023 9:59:00 AM
"Honorable Mention" ~ Bottomless Depth ~ Date Written: 8/13/2023 ~ Note: "Not A True Story." Just A Write...
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Date: 9/3/2023 11:46:00 PM
It is such a tense moment ! When we stay away from our parents, our mind will be anxious to know of their well being. Instead, if we get a sad news, it will be so upsetting ! Congratulations Paula !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2023 10:01:00 AM
Thank You for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this write. Not True, just a write. Have a blessed day/week writing away............
Date: 8/13/2023 11:03:00 AM
I breathed easier knowing this was fiction, Paula. Good lead in to what would be a terribly sad homecoming.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/13/2023 12:34:00 PM
Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a blessed day/week writing away............
Date: 8/13/2023 10:00:00 AM
Bottomless Depth ~ Date Written: 8/13/2023 ~ Note: "Not A True Story." Just A Write...
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