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All this baggage I would love To put it behind me What this girl wouldn't give To trade it For some junk in the trunk 17.10.14 For Broken Wings' "Could You, Please"

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Date: 10/31/2017 10:09:00 AM
Cool play on words, Maureen. I like this creative concept, I like it a lot. Excellent poem. Love and joy always.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/31/2017 12:36:00 PM
Thanknyou my dear! Bless and bless! <3 xomo!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2017 10:09:00 AM
Btw ... a great title. Love and more love to you and yours.
Date: 10/26/2017 1:42:00 AM
I really like that. Let's be a junkster.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/26/2017 7:22:00 AM
Giggles :) let's!
Date: 10/23/2017 8:06:00 AM
Congrats Maureen, for your placement with this wonderful piece! ;-)
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/23/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Teddy :) xomo!
Date: 10/21/2017 9:12:00 AM
Maureen, congratulations on your win in my contest with this delightful write, it made me smile !
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/21/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D Have a wonderful weekend Constance much love xomo!
Date: 10/20/2017 11:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Maureen, For some junk in the trunk and have some nice fun..great write . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/21/2017 6:29:00 AM
Thank you Eve :) xomo!
Date: 10/17/2017 11:28:00 AM
Been there, more to declutter. A witty poe! Thank you for your interesting comment on my work.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/17/2017 4:30:00 PM
Thank You Gabby! :) xomo
Date: 10/17/2017 2:56:00 AM
I get you, girl. Absolutely.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/17/2017 6:55:00 AM
Giggle love and hugs! :)
Date: 10/16/2017 10:39:00 AM
LOL!!!!! How you do go on. Speaking from perfection of course. Funny thing is my perfection is now giving me callouses on my knees and heels. love this!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/16/2017 11:53:00 AM
Giggles! A lovely day to you dear poetess! xomo :)
Date: 10/16/2017 8:35:00 AM
Was it Norman Mailer? Said... "Just attach a trailer."
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/16/2017 8:38:00 AM
Lol! I picked up a cosmetic surgery mag to balk at but gotta say, those butt falsies, if I won a million... ;)
Date: 10/15/2017 5:28:00 PM
I love short and cute poems such as this one, Maureen:) We all have stuff which we're better off without!! Regards // paul
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/15/2017 10:14:00 PM
We sure do ;) Thank you Paul, lovely day to you xomo
Date: 10/15/2017 6:24:00 AM
Happy trading!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/15/2017 8:37:00 AM
Lol :) lovely day to you Vijay! xomo
Date: 10/14/2017 11:04:00 PM
Excellent. Very inspirational write. Enjoyed reading it.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/15/2017 8:35:00 AM
Thank you Ravi :) xomo!
Date: 10/14/2017 10:14:00 PM
Lovely inspirational poem. Let bygones be bygones and save the sweet moments. Nicely executed! Ty for commenting on mine!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/15/2017 8:34:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne :)
Date: 10/14/2017 9:39:00 PM
made me smile, wanna trade?
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 10/14/2017 9:43:00 PM
*giggle* ;)