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Bottomed Out

All this baggage I would love To put it behind me What this girl wouldn't give To trade it For some junk in the trunk 17.10.14 For Broken Wings' "Could You, Please"

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/31/2017 10:09:00 AM

Cool play on words, Maureen. I like this creative concept, I like it a lot. Excellent poem. Love and joy always.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/31/2017 12:36:00 PM

Thanknyou my dear! Bless and bless! <3 xomo!

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2017 10:09:00 AM

Btw ... a great title. Love and more love to you and yours.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/26/2017 1:42:00 AM

I really like that. Let's be a junkster.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/26/2017 7:22:00 AM

Giggles :) let's!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/23/2017 8:06:00 AM

Congrats Maureen, for your placement with this wonderful piece! ;-)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/23/2017 8:11:00 AM

Thank you Teddy :) xomo!

Constance La France

Date: 10/21/2017 9:12:00 AM

Maureen, congratulations on your win in my contest with this delightful write, it made me smile !

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/21/2017 9:54:00 AM

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D Have a wonderful weekend Constance much love xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2017 11:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Maureen, For some junk in the trunk and have some nice fun..great write . Hugs Eve ~`*

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/21/2017 6:29:00 AM

Thank you Eve :) xomo!

Gabby Sabre

Date: 10/17/2017 11:28:00 AM

Been there, more to declutter. A witty poe! Thank you for your interesting comment on my work.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/17/2017 4:30:00 PM

Thank You Gabby! :) xomo

Darren White

Date: 10/17/2017 2:56:00 AM

I get you, girl. Absolutely.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/17/2017 6:55:00 AM

Giggle love and hugs! :)

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/16/2017 10:39:00 AM

LOL!!!!! How you do go on. Speaking from perfection of course. Funny thing is my perfection is now giving me callouses on my knees and heels. love this!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/16/2017 11:53:00 AM

Giggles! A lovely day to you dear poetess! xomo :)