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Bottomed Out

All this baggage
I would love 
To put it behind me

What this girl wouldn't give
To trade it
For some junk in the trunk




  17.10.14

For Broken Wings' 
"Could You, Please"

funnyintrospectionlight verse

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

October 31, 2017 at 10:09 AM

Cool play on words, Maureen. I like this creative concept, I like it a lot. Excellent poem. Love and joy always.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 31, 2017 at 12:36 PM

Thanknyou my dear! Bless and bless! <3 xomo!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

October 31, 2017 at 10:09 AM

Btw ... a great title. Love and more love to you and yours.

Kai Michael Neumann

October 26, 2017 at 1:42 AM

I really like that. Let's be a junkster.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 26, 2017 at 7:22 AM

Giggles :) let's!

Teddy Kimathi

October 23, 2017 at 8:06 AM

Congrats Maureen, for your placement with this wonderful piece! ;-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 23, 2017 at 8:11 AM

Thank you Teddy :) xomo!

Constance La France

October 21, 2017 at 9:12 AM

Maureen, congratulations on your win in my contest with this delightful write, it made me smile !

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 21, 2017 at 9:54 AM

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D Have a wonderful weekend Constance much love xomo!

Eve Roper

October 20, 2017 at 11:06 PM

Congratulations on your win, Maureen, For some junk in the trunk and have some nice fun..great write . Hugs Eve ~`*

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 21, 2017 at 6:29 AM

Thank you Eve :) xomo!

Gabby Sabre

October 17, 2017 at 11:28 AM

Been there, more to declutter. A witty poe! Thank you for your interesting comment on my work.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 17, 2017 at 4:30 PM

Thank You Gabby! :) xomo

Darren White

October 17, 2017 at 2:56 AM

I get you, girl. Absolutely.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 17, 2017 at 6:55 AM

Giggle love and hugs! :)

Patricia Cresswell

October 16, 2017 at 10:39 AM

LOL!!!!! How you do go on. Speaking from perfection of course. Funny thing is my perfection is now giving me callouses on my knees and heels. love this!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 16, 2017 at 11:53 AM

Giggles! A lovely day to you dear poetess! xomo :)