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all i know is ~
when i reach out
you're not there



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

longingloverelationshipfree verse

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Sally Eslinger

July 10, 2022 at 8:05 AM

I’d say, Sad but true…Difficult but I think that’s why it’s good to have otherS also there. Now if this is about grieving a soulmate/partner, we’ll these short lines speak devastation. My heart literally sank after the last syllable. Its distinct truth, its precisely chosen language with its built released drama hit hard,stabbing by its leaving drop… Wow!

Line Gauthier

July 10, 2022 at 9:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Sally ~

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