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all i know is ~ when i reach out you're not there AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on July 6, 2022

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/10/2022 8:05:00 AM

I’d say, Sad but true…Difficult but I think that’s why it’s good to have otherS also there. Now if this is about grieving a soulmate/partner, we’ll these short lines speak devastation. My heart literally sank after the last syllable. Its distinct truth, its precisely chosen language with its built released drama hit hard,stabbing by its leaving drop… Wow!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/10/2022 9:00:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Sally ~