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Bottled Up

it comes and goes lately it seems to linger leaving a few more scars in its wake the mastering of self the balance of craving the emptiness shattered beneath us why must we relive old memories collecting saddened streams of haste causing injury to the pure foundation of emotional bliss the beautiful part of self that rises to the surface to rescue us from complete despair awaken to soon we continue to wonder aimlessly into moving traumatic events reaching for respite familiar reoccurring night terrors offering up our own mental self broken by a bleak metaphor seeking melancholy behavior only finding mirth bottled up to perfection

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Date: 8/16/2023 7:11:00 AM
Dear Poetess, Wow and mini- woos..so incredibly soul searching are you in these poems. I am envious and deeply impressed.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 8/18/2023 2:31:00 AM
thanks a bunch sweetie .
Date: 7/20/2023 4:56:00 PM
wow! Thanks for sharing your work!
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/16/2024 3:45:00 AM
Thank you for reading my work.
Date: 6/25/2023 12:40:00 PM
I enjoyed your "bottled up" write. Enjoy your day writing away............
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/16/2024 3:44:00 AM
Thanks a bunch Paula.
Date: 6/23/2023 8:19:00 AM
A captivating poetry, Yolanda. Allow yourself to wander among the trees and embrace the beauty of the natural world. It has been known to provide solace and clarity during times of emotional turmoil.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/16/2024 3:46:00 AM
Indeed thank you so much for your kindness many blessings.
Date: 6/23/2023 7:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this.... Thanks likewise for your uplifting comment. Meanwhile, may I greet you with the love of the Lord expressed in John 3:16 of the Bible: “For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.” God bless you.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/16/2024 3:46:00 AM
Thank you many blessings.
Date: 6/21/2023 12:12:00 PM
Being bottled up is surely not good for anyone. Well done for dramatic verse, Yolanda
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/16/2024 3:46:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness.
Date: 6/21/2023 10:30:00 AM
Take a walk with Nature , out into the woods. That has the effect oft to help with our minds/hearts when we are vexed. I've been where you described and Nature walks soother my spirit. A fav. God bless..
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/16/2024 3:47:00 AM
Thank you for your compassion and kindness many blessings.

Book: Shattered Sighs