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Bottled Memories

As I sit on the beach With a empty glass coke bottle The wind is blowing and so is my thoughts The sand is cool, The waves whisper your name The dark skies are empty of stars, But full of night. I begin to cry, Watery tears But I dare not to waste them Each one that falls from my cheeks The empty glass coke bottle catches each drop. For each drop is a memory of our love. Rest in heaven my dear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/3/2019 4:34:00 PM
Nicely written. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.
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Patrick Collier
Date: 2/6/2019 10:43:00 PM
Thanks for reading. Made my day
Date: 1/22/2019 8:38:00 AM
The coke bottle seems to have symbolic meaning...perhaps you two shared a coke together. A beautiful symbol not of alcohol but of sweet love and friendship. Sorry for your loss.
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Patrick Collier
Date: 1/22/2019 8:48:00 AM
Thanks for reading and what's crazy It was all just made up in my head. Linked to no reality just a creation. Thanks Kim
Date: 1/21/2019 11:31:00 PM
Very sweet. A great read for the night!
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Patrick Collier
Date: 1/22/2019 8:49:00 AM
At times that is all we need to fall asleep and dream of sweetness. Thanks for reading Amber
Date: 1/20/2019 7:16:00 PM
A lullaby, sweet, sincere, and lovely.
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