Both Come True

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Inspired by Maureen Mcgreavy's haiku, "Wish upon a star come true," I present the following tribute ...

wish upon a star wish upon a shape … both come true … Maureen's haiku!

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Tikar Osuru

Date: 7/11/2018 9:55:00 AM

Very nice haiku!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/12/2018 5:33:00 PM

Tikar, how nice of you to weigh in with such praise. Best wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/11/2018 8:53:00 AM

Sweetly done, and so nice.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/12/2018 5:32:00 PM

Thank you, thank you, my friend. :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/11/2018 8:30:00 AM

Aaaah! Happy happy joy joy! I was just checking out the trampled little milkweed with eggs that I put in a mason of water and nestled in my milkweed patch, it's sporting a wee little I think 2nd instar, just starting to show stripes :)) Thank you my comrade <3 xomo!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/11/2018 6:43:00 AM

Lovely tribute Gershon to a wonderful poet. Tom.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/11/2018 8:30:00 AM

Thank You Tom! :) xomo!