Both Ache and Joy

There is something about the cuddle of mist that washes the pain of love's farewell like a damp of healing elixir, so softly touching my navel to ignite back the glaze within my marrow; and breaths sing with playful twilight about fresh enchantment blessed... Now i greet the flowering of joy with unopened gifts, knowing goodbye is a beautiful wound as one star plays night keeper of reflective hours humming a new tune, dainty yet unknown, that in the solace born from ache and joy, I welcome it all-- the fire, wonder, and sighs. Thomas Martin:Romantic Fools Contest
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Breidenthal Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 11:58 PM
I am so impressed by this gorgeous poem! It opens up the reader knowing that you are open. Awesome work here. Truly brilliant. Always, Laura
Manassian Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 1:38 PM
This is so beautiful, Nette. Congrats on your win! It is a very impressive word play indeed! The ending is just superb. Hugs back at ya. Thanks for your visits to my work!
Macmillan Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 8:20 PM
THis one leaves me so quiet, like a minute alone in church, the light just so... congrats on the win, so beautiful, so FULL!
A  Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 9:38 PM
this is a nice poem, CONGRATS!! SKAT
Jones Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 7:11 PM
Many congratulations nette ..:-)
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:33 PM
Congratulations with your impressive winning word play poem, ... Take Care <3 xox <3 LINDA
Oyewole Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 11:39 AM
Magnificent! Congrats on your win Nette. AO
Morrison Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 8:02 PM
Beautiful poem! Kim
Guzzi Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 2:56 PM
Beautifully written Nette. It passes on great expressions. 'Life lost and found'. Congratulation on a well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Ryerson Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 2:23 PM
I am SO glad you are back! - Tim
Devnath  Avatar
May 17, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Wish you congratulation on your nice win. Loved always, bl
Chircop Avatar
May 11, 2013 at 3:33 PM
This beauty reminds me of my teenage years when one short loving relationship used to end..It used to be sad but somehow looking forward to the unknown exciting as watching a falling shooting star and make a wish.Beautiful poem sweet Nette
Oyewole Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 12:33 PM
a very well written piece. Good job.
Babcock Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 9:45 AM
A gem of a poem. It just makes me sigh. How are you Nette? love phyl
Ryerson Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 11:51 AM
'there is something about the cuddle of mist' and 'knowing goodbye is a beautiful wound' Oh my...
Squyres Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 9:34 AM
What a mixture life throws our way...the blending of it all makes us who we are. Each sigh, each goodbye in tender or hurtful manner...still strengthens our character. Love your poem and where it took me....
Devnath  Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 1:32 PM
Very sweet poem ys, enjoyed a lot. Thanks......,Loved always, bl
Poet Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 12:07 PM
Wow..this is really an outstanding poem Nette!This goes to my favs!
Tacito Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Goodbye can, indeed, be a beautiful wound. Yes to embracing life for all its strengths & flaws. Stunning write!
Jones Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 7:52 AM
Yes nette , it must start somewhere...and you have written it so beautifully, surely it must ease ones pain....
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 7:12 AM
Interesting work..It is expressive and emotive..Thanks for stopping by..If this is for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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May 7, 2013 at 6:24 AM
Wow, this is a tender and joyful write, a sigh of amazing delight of the unknown! You have masterfully displayed your awesome talent again with this passionate poem here this morning! What a tremendous piece, such a reflection of the stars within my eyes, a otherworldly sight, Great work!!
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May 7, 2013 at 3:23 AM
- I do not like to say goodbye, I would rather say see you again soon. - Welcome is enjoyable .... Now I want to say welcome to spring and birdsong. - As always, you have written a clever poem my friend Nette! - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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