Born Under a Bad Sign

Mother don’t cry for me 
I done chose the life I lead.
Lined with trouble, doubts and 
pain. Marked for death with 
life’s cold stain. They caught 
me driven down highway one,
Thrown in jail, my freedom 
done. I killed a man to watch 
him die, I couldn’t tell the 
sheriff why. I did my time and 
paid my debts, I smelled like 
booze and cigarettes. I could 
never quench the hate, not 
much food upon my plate. My
conscience was muddled with 
guilt and shame, clothed in 
sorrow, bathed in blame. If I 
added up the cost, it wasn’t 
worth the time I lost. I was void
of love and pride, I could not 
fill the hole inside. If you see me 
coming you best step away, I 
might take your life to start my
day. Under the sign of which I was 
born, stuck in my side like a 
jagged thorn. As I come to my 
end, my journey through I’ve
nothing more to say to you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 3/11/2022 5:27:00 AM
Agree with Julie, feels like a song, great write, Charles
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Charles Bateman
Date: 3/13/2022 12:00:00 PM
Unseeking Seeker thank you for your kind words I appreciate you and Julie so very much. Sincerely charlieboy
Date: 3/6/2022 7:35:00 PM
This could easily be made into a song.....think about it. I could almost hear it while I read....I love the way the rhymes flow. It already seems to have the beat......Great job as a poem or song.I enjoyed it very much.
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Charles Bateman
Date: 3/7/2022 5:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much, I appreciate your encouraging comments
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