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Born Under a Bad Sign

Mother don’t cry for me I done chose the life I lead. Lined with trouble, doubts and pain. Marked for death with life’s cold stain. They caught me driven down highway one, Thrown in jail, my freedom done. I killed a man to watch him die, I couldn’t tell the sheriff why. I did my time and paid my debts, I smelled like booze and cigarettes. I could never quench the hate, not much food upon my plate. My conscience was muddled with guilt and shame, clothed in sorrow, bathed in blame. If I added up the cost, it wasn’t worth the time I lost. I was void of love and pride, I could not fill the hole inside. If you see me coming you best step away, I might take your life to start my day. Under the sign of which I was born, stuck in my side like a jagged thorn. As I come to my end, my journey through I’ve nothing more to say to you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 3/11/2022 5:27:00 AM
Agree with Julie, feels like a song, great write, Charles
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Charles Bateman
Date: 3/13/2022 12:00:00 PM
Unseeking Seeker thank you for your kind words I appreciate you and Julie so very much. Sincerely charlieboy
Date: 3/6/2022 7:35:00 PM
This could easily be made into a song.....think about it. I could almost hear it while I read....I love the way the rhymes flow. It already seems to have the beat......Great job as a poem or song.I enjoyed it very much.
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Charles Bateman
Date: 3/7/2022 5:36:00 AM
Thank you so very much, I appreciate your encouraging comments

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