Born To Dance

I danced a dance, not danced before,
the masses beamed in admiration.
Flames of passion slid along the dance floor,
as my body floated like a possessed butterfly.

But the gingerbread people, old, fat and fickle,
pointed fingers asking for me to dance no more!
Their envious eyes burned with jealousy,
as they were incapable of coping with my fire.
Afraid I would pour hot water on them,
they began to shun me against the masses.
The ignorant followed suit, but the dancers knew better.

Hypocritical gingerbread people then began to dance,
their moves had no co-ordination, no rhythm,
it was sadly a pathetic display of imbecilic prancing!
The masses laughed and mocked, poor hypocrites,
crumbling gingerbread', crumbled into pieces,
their taste so sour, crowds puked with antipathy!

Hypocrites still try to dance today,
guess practice makes perfect - right?
I continue to dance my dance,
in a rainbow of styles, bringing delight.

When you are born to dance,
the heart will make those feet move!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Juman Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 11:32 AM
You are a good writer well composed
Sharma Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 3:24 AM
Seems it comes from the heart of a passionate dancer! Loved it, lived it! :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 2:36 PM
So lovely and descriptive, Yazmin! Janice
La France Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Very nice.. Congratulations on potd
Ajmal Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 1:34 PM
This is truly a wonderful poem, people will always try to show that they are better or you are wrong, they ll stop you from doing something bt continue to do so, I loved the message behind this poem of yours, congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, it is indeed a beauty
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 1:14 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely p.o.t.d. Yazmin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Great choice for POTD Yaz..
Warrior Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Congrats!!! Yazmin on your POTD!...a superb write my friend...love and light...^WW^
Gentile Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations Yazmin!!!
Pandit Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 6:21 AM
Glad to see you in this space Yazmin..back with congrats on poem of the day.
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 6:08 AM
Yazmin, back to say congrats on POTD, nicely done. John
Talbot Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 6:05 AM
Dance on, write on! Congratulations on POTW. Mick
Williams Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 5:54 AM
Back with my congratulations on POTD Yazmin, well deserved....Maria :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Just coming back to say congratulations on POTD Yazmin. Well deserved. Have a great day. Tom.
George   Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 11:44 PM
It sounds like dancing is your passion. Great writing, Yazmin. Elaine
May Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 10:40 AM
The imitators crumble, but your dance must go on!, Very nicely penned Yazmin
Rose  Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:40 AM
If they are made of gingerbread you ought to eat them, lol, (always people spreading negative energy) don't let it deter you from being who you are and sharing with the world the best part of you. Thanks for sharing Jazmin M
S     Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:19 AM
The gingerbread people have not found their dance ... too concerned with how others express their passion. Your love can't be contained nor trounced on by the hypocrites ... and they will always exist. Dance on beautiful spirit!
One Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:16 AM
I like the message in your poem Yaz.. A hypocrite will always be a hypocrite, telling you not to do something, but doing it themselves... Yet very badly... Jealousy will always be there when another is doing so well... You are a perfect example how you can overcome such negativity and do well in life.. Great write..
Gentile Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 8:01 AM
I found this to be such an interesting statement and message, Yazmin and expressed in a most beautiful way. I really enjoyed reading it Happy Friday xxoo
Trifiatis Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Dance is the result of the collaboration of soul and body in an effort to express our mood! A profound poem examining the depths of our being and an analysis of character so very well done my friend, Yasmin!
Williams Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Very original write Yazmin and so true. Usually those that have no talent are the ones to point a finger, disparage and belittle. But belief in ones self makes one rise above the crumbs of uncoordinated 'gingerbread' bourgeoisie - a well deserved FAVE from me ...Maria :)
Gondolf Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Don't let the hypocrites interrupt your dance, Yazmin, just keep moving to life's music. John
Cunningham Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 6:58 AM
Lovely verse Yazmin and if it's you, well done. I have no time for jealous hypocrites who try and ruin peoples lives. Tom.
Malik Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:10 AM
I am a retired professional dancer and choreographer dear Tom. When I first started, I had many obstacles to overcome, this included jealousy and also sexual harassment. Today I stand tall, proud of what I have achieved. Thank you for you support :)
Pandit Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 6:25 AM
WOW! This is so brilliantly written. I love the metaphorical depiction ...the gingerbread people, as you say, are no match for the genuine ones.
Malik Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 7:10 AM
I agree, stay away from the Ginges! :)
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