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Bored In Manhattan

I sit, from Canal to 209 and back
watching the doors open and close.
I see glimpses of Times Square's neon lights, West 4th's man-made green, Columbus Circle's arrows to the park
as the doors open and close.
I hear music, Mexican guitarists, a cappella, a breakdancer's stereo
entering and exiting through the doors. Open and close.
I hear plans for the night, for the next day, for the next week, for later
and the doors open and close.
And I sit, from Canal to 209 and back,
in the city and not,
On a seat that does not question my empty pockets
as my eyes open and close.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 3:01 AM
Hi Elizabeth. Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)
Staines Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:46 PM
Thank you, Teddy!
A  Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 12:38 AM
Elizabeth, :) Congratulations!!! ~SKAT LOVE~
Staines Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Curious, if you can answer, and apologies for the newbie question- where do you see contest winners?
Staines Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Thanks, Skat! And thanks for the welcome!
A   Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 11:36 PM
lovely win. LINDA
Staines Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Konos Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Most interesting, unusual write....Congratulations...
Staines Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Very kind. Thank you, Judy.
Ward Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 3:09 PM
A good Honorable Mention poem... It needed a touch more evidence of boredom, though, as the main message seemed to be one of poverty.
Staines Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:48 PM
Very cool. Thanks, Julia! Thank you for the feedback.
A   Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 10:55 PM
Elizabeth WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Shoes Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 10:29 PM
I feel like i am in NY, again. Good nite to be bored, Downton Abby is on!
Staines Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Love that show!
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Elizabeth, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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