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Bored In Manhattan

I sit, from Canal to 209 and back watching the doors open and close. I see glimpses of Times Square's neon lights, West 4th's man-made green, Columbus Circle's arrows to the park as the doors open and close. I hear music, Mexican guitarists, a cappella, a breakdancer's stereo entering and exiting through the doors. Open and close. I hear plans for the night, for the next day, for the next week, for later and the doors open and close. And I sit, from Canal to 209 and back, in the city and not, On a seat that does not question my empty pockets as my eyes open and close.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/7/2016 3:01:00 AM
Hi Elizabeth. Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)
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Elizabeth Staines
Date: 1/7/2016 9:46:00 PM
Thank you, Teddy!
Date: 1/7/2016 12:38:00 AM
Elizabeth, :) Congratulations!!! ~SKAT LOVE~
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Elizabeth Staines
Date: 1/7/2016 9:49:00 PM
Curious, if you can answer, and apologies for the newbie question- where do you see contest winners?
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Elizabeth Staines
Date: 1/7/2016 9:47:00 PM
Thanks, Skat! And thanks for the welcome!
Date: 1/6/2016 11:36:00 PM
lovely win. LINDA
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Elizabeth Staines
Date: 1/7/2016 9:47:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 1/6/2016 3:53:00 PM
Most interesting, unusual write....Congratulations...
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Elizabeth Staines
Date: 1/7/2016 9:47:00 PM
Very kind. Thank you, Judy.
Date: 1/6/2016 3:09:00 PM
A good Honorable Mention poem... It needed a touch more evidence of boredom, though, as the main message seemed to be one of poverty.
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Elizabeth Staines
Date: 1/7/2016 9:48:00 PM
Very cool. Thanks, Julia! Thank you for the feedback.
Date: 1/4/2016 10:55:00 PM
Elizabeth WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/3/2016 10:29:00 PM
I feel like i am in NY, again. Good nite to be bored, Downton Abby is on!
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Elizabeth Staines
Date: 1/7/2016 9:49:00 PM
Love that show!
Date: 1/3/2016 9:23:00 PM
Elizabeth, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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