Bl Devnath Poet Limerick

Boomerang Husband's Purr

Jaunty can't live without her
                                          for silly matters deter
                                         actually he loves much 
                                       gone from home no touch
                                       boomerang husband's purr







Note: Sorry, this is my first limerick

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Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2014 at 11:45 PM Hey, BL. Thanks for your birthday wish! Good try for first limerick. It's only lacking meter! Bl Devnath September 11, 2014 at 10:09 AM May be my friend, you have rightly said, I think too. Just tried. Thanks for your comment. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 11:45 AM - Skillfully my dear friend (I have tried but with poor results) - I enjoy your -well done, bl !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath September 9, 2014 at 12:15 PM Many thanks my lovely friend for your inspirational comment. Loved always,bl

Casarah Nance September 8, 2014 at 1:58 PM Your syllable count is good, 77,55,7. the last line should rhyme with the first and second line: a,a, b, b, a. Not bad for your first limerick, I've tried a couple too, and had to tweek them. Hugs my friend, :) Casarah Nance September 8, 2014 at 6:22 PM Good change :) Bl Devnath September 8, 2014 at 2:28 PM I wrote previously as "boomerang hubby's purr" first time, then used you read, now again changed. Pl. guide me. Thanks for your kind comment. First comment I have received from you on my Limerick. Thanks with a sweet bucket of lovely flowers. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl