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I was forever losing things, and my laughing friends called me a klutz, Like darker skies misplace buttery sun, when a severe storm develops. I had once lost the keys to my house, and waited locked out all night, As mistakes of our older yesterdays, solicit tomorrow to make it right. Plane tickets had disappeared, along with books that I'd been reading, As honeybees search the meadows, for the thing they are most needing. On one occasion I had lost my watch, and on another, a new briefcase; But what I'd lost was never replaced, though my footsteps I retraced! As the pale glimmering full moon, never deigns to look back at noon, Because she and the deep black night, have begun their evening's tune! People I knew just came to expect, that soon a thing would be lost, Like the loss of gold intensity, in the garden sunshine had glossed! I was at a park with chums one day, in the gorgeous month of August, When emerald wonders summoned us, and vibrant birdsongs were robust. We were just enjoying a lazy day, with its divers sights and sounds, Like the parti-colored views you get, on a ferris wheel coming down! Butterflies flew from bloom to bloom, as the sun shone like old gold, With a warmth in its later age, its dazzling youth had once foretold. Bees created an incessant drone, while geese were lustily splashing; And all over laughter was heard, the hummingbirds at times flashing. We decided on a game of boomerang, and those who dropped it were out, Last one standing would win the game, like a budding tree's turnabout! We found a large and grassy space, and we laughingly began our game; Then one friend sat down, first to lose, in a laughing walk of shame. Some of us could catch awfully well, so it was a rigorous competition. Soon but few of us were left standing, like statues full of tension! The irony that I was among the finalists, was not lost on any of us, I, who'd never retrieved anything, either insignificant or precious. The competition and the day wore on, until we were down to only two, And my chum and I still let the boomerang fly, as rosy shadows grew. Later my friend fumbled, shrieked, and missed the boomerang by inches; And we were all shocked that I'd won, like when cold reality pinches! We were tired and we were happy, from a long day of sunshine thrills, Somewhat like witnessing the golden joys, in the fields of daffodils. That was the beginning of my turnaround, the end of my careless lack, For all the things I'd earlier misplaced, began finding their way back! As the earth spinning round and round, brings back springtime leaves; And the bleakness of winter is forgotten, along with autumn's peeves. Car keys and wallet tickets and books, were soon found as if by magic; And though I knew not how it occurred, the fact alone made me ecstatic! Like the past you thought had died, that keeps returning in memories, Or echoes deep in the canyons, returning discourse on scented breeze. As I kept finding my possessions, I began to learn from past mistakes; And I saw that a life lived too carelessly, invites chaos to overtake. And our lives are much too precious, to be lived in suchlike fashion, For it is the most dear thing we own, full of our joys and passions!

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Date: 6/23/2021 10:31:00 AM
Stupendous poem Evelyn - love your whole couplet poem, but my favorite verse is your 2nd last verse. so well penned Eve, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/23/2021 11:04:00 AM
Your appreciation is such a joy, Jennifer. Thank you. All my best, Evelyn :)
Date: 6/20/2021 8:35:00 PM
Epic peace nice ryhme and pattern gives a sense of longing hope you find what your looking for xx
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Date: 6/20/2021 9:04:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, David. Blessings :)
Date: 6/19/2021 11:23:00 AM
Evelyn, a masterpiece. Perfect poetry, beautiful poetry!! Pure poetry from start to finish. I generally don't read longer works, but this one I wanted to go on forever. A Fav.!
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Date: 6/19/2021 12:02:00 PM
I am honored by your favourable remarks and by the Fav, Joe. I am truly delighted that you enjoyed my tale. Thank you so much. :)
Date: 6/19/2021 8:47:00 AM
Evelyn, Oh yes, oh yes., there's never enough turns on a ferris wheel. That feeling as you descend back to the ground. I miss those boomerang days. Thanks for bringing them back. -Richard
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Date: 6/19/2021 11:02:00 AM
It was my pleasure, Richard. Thank you very much for your thoughts. I'm so glad you enjoyed this tale of a remarkable turnaround. Evelyn
Date: 6/19/2021 4:58:00 AM
Beautiful how you give us the lessons of life combined with your experiences, great imagery too, Evelyn:)
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Date: 6/19/2021 11:04:00 AM
I appreciate your warm words very much, Jo. :)
Date: 6/19/2021 12:54:00 AM
I liked the idea of comparing lost things to a boomerang. Your descriptions are beyond compare. Great metaphors and imagery. Hugs.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/19/2021 11:10:00 AM
Your appreciation for my couplets is a delight, Victor. Thank you so much. Hugs.
Date: 6/18/2021 10:59:00 PM
I generally avoid reading lengthy poems, too lazy at times but your poem about missing things struck a chord within me, I often do that. Really liked your ending, last two para.... now I have decided to change myself (don't know how, but will surely try). You are absolutely right!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/19/2021 11:18:00 AM
I am so glad that you're taking away something of value from this tale, Rama. That is so nice to know. Thank you for your warm expressions of appreciation. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn
Date: 6/18/2021 8:42:00 PM
Those are perfect couplets. Evelyn, your language, symbolism, and use of metaphors is just fantastic. I believe I adore your writings, and this one is a definite favorite. Your wonderful poetry is embellished with more beauty due to the Tableau of Art and the video: Gratitudes and sincere appreciation.
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Date: 6/18/2021 9:54:00 PM
Thank you for your heartening thoughts, Lasaad. This is wonderful news! I adore writing these stories, so it is gratifying when someone adores reading them. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn :)

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