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Books and Shells - Yalto

Written for my granddaughter and nephew who begin their college life this week. BOOKS AND SHELLS books and shells - memory stuff, sandy toes and smart eyes. college girls and boys drink it up, not beer - wisdom’s cup, so you can top your class. be beachy when it’s time to rest, but remember your class, YOU erudite scholar. 8/16/2020 Yalto" is a form invented by Edward Ibeh Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

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Date: 8/16/2020 12:08:00 PM
There have been many teen beach parties in my area, even with the pandemic. I guess we can't fault teens for wanting to "play." This is an interesting and new form to me. Well done, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Date: 8/16/2020 8:43:00 AM
Nicely written reminders to them, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanne!
Date: 8/16/2020 8:36:00 AM
Excellent write Kim--your message truly resonates.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2020 9:48:00 AM
Thanks :)

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