Premiere Contest WinnerBook of Souls

Underneath unfathomable depths, choked by decaying thistle,  
Where briny seas mix with putrid sentiment,  
Creating cloudy waters of macabre melancholy,  
Stand rusted arches, encompassing a thick, bleak, moldy door.  
The smell of musk fills every molecule.  
A slippery path of petrified rocks springs forth,  
Creating a bewitching bridge between worlds.  
Temptation courses through reincarnated pores,  
But proceed with caution, as the siren call of eternal life beckons you in this perpetual loop.  
For the path to the Book of Souls is riddled with sacrifices—  
Sacrifices that masquerade as false hope,  
Gut past lives, and eradicate future ones.  
The butterfly effect holds far more power than you know.  
So gingerly, take that step upon the stones.  
Drown out the menacing laughs of the gods, old and new.  
Divert your attention back to the passageway in front of you.  
This time, you must get it right; you must make it to the door.  
Your skin is turning paler, hair lackluster.  
You can feel your soul tiring.  
Who knows how many more chances you have until your existence completely fades away?
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R P Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 10:46 PM
Congradulations Sara Jama on your trophy win. Amazing!
Jama Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Thank you so much.
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April 22, 2025 at 12:29 PM
Dear sara, Theres so much depth in your soulful poem written for the song! I wouldnt have thought of interpreting it the way youv done it in such a concise and profound manner! And concluding the poem with a question, that leaves a soul stirring vibe to it! I really love the lines “ Sacrifices that masquerade as false hope, Gut past lives, and eradicate future ones. The butterfly effect holds far more power than you know. ” the depth of your words and how they flow truly is very poetic! Congratulations on your trophy win! Well deserved it is! You did an amazing job as always! Impeccable! Sending you light! Fave it is
Jama Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Thank you Ink.
Liguori Avatar
April 22, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Wow! What can I say… best poem ever!!! Enjoy your trophy win!!!
Jama Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 9:21 AM
Thank you for placing me in your contest.
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