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Boogie Woogie Man

Watch out for da Boogie Woogie man he's comin ta get ya if he can Ooh smooth moves soft lips he's got dem electric hips A twirling dynamo who likes ta dip Ya doze buttons ain't safe dat bra strap's likely ta rip Look at da twinkle in is eye He promises ta make ya fly Yep just wait, me oh my he'll lift dat dress so high Hardly even will he hafta try he got da moves dat'll make ya sigh Afterwords you jus be wonderin why Like I say he da Boogie Woogie man he's comin ta get ya if he can Ooh smooth moves soft lips he's got dem electric hips Twirling dynamo who likes ta dip Ya doze buttons ain't safe dat bra strap's likely ta rip Ripped bra buttons on da floor heat's up high but ya want more He flips ya round four times four in da shower up against the door Ya feel da heat deep in yo core It's like da waves are crashing on da shore He says "do ya like it dat way whore!" He makes ya ta feel da shame So ya run outta his place lipstick all smeared on yo face But ya still feel yo heart race as you clutch dat ripped lace All yo pleasure gone every trace if only ya had a can a mace You warn her about the Boogie Woogie man "He's coming to get you if he can Smooth moves soft lips don't be seduced by those electric hips That fellow wants to do more than dip Your buttons aren't going to be safe that bra strap is likely to rip!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/12/2018 4:42:00 PM
Hi Richard, this is such a creative write Richard, it flows so well, sings into the mind. This was fun to read. I loved the content from beginning to end. Richard, you are singing at your best on this one. Excellent work my friend. Have a wonderful Tuesday. your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:38:00 AM
This is so fun to read. Can't get it out of my head <3
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2017 9:00:00 AM
Hello Anony, thanks for visiting.
Date: 11/25/2017 9:42:00 AM
That was quite the twist. Sign of a great poem when your jaw drops midway, especially when the reader is chuckling throughout till that one spot, coming to that sudden gasp... Masterfully done, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2017 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Line. It was a fun one to write.
Date: 11/22/2017 3:37:00 PM
This reminds me of a jazzy little painting my aunt had on her wall of a young couple dancin' -sassy and colorful !!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2017 7:57:00 AM
Thanks Gayle, i’m Off to sample your writing.
Date: 11/18/2017 12:17:00 PM
Such a beautiful written poem, I really am in love with this poem, the boogie woogie man and how he s gonna win the heart of that women and your advise to not get impressed by him but rather be safe, believe me it was such a really beautiful and nice poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/18/2017 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Faraz.
Date: 11/12/2017 12:45:00 PM
Sorry spelling again... grin..
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Date: 11/12/2017 12:44:00 PM
Hi Richard,.I have a gron on my face. Its so refreshingly different and the tone sets the pace. I dig it. Jannie
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/18/2017 1:35:00 PM
Ha ha, luckily you didn’t have the o and i together as that would have been even more humorous.
Date: 10/28/2017 12:48:00 PM
Glad for your visit to the Tit for Tat poetry! ;)
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Date: 10/26/2017 8:15:00 PM
OH my gosh, what a fantastic play off boogie man. A guy who brings lust then leaves ya in the dust!! This is awesome creativity, Richard. I loves it!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, just a bit of silliness but it was fun to write.
Date: 10/26/2017 5:54:00 PM
Charming poem..creative thoughts!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 10/26/2017 10:12:00 AM
He certainly sounds like a charmer Richard love the dialect you used I could picture him in action so vividly:-) hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2017 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Jan, hugs back to you. :0)
Date: 10/26/2017 9:57:00 AM
Interesting poem Richard! Can't wait to see more of your work!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2017 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Kudzai.
Date: 10/26/2017 8:57:00 AM
Sounds like an awesome song! Love how this flows so well..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Silent.:0)
Date: 10/26/2017 4:04:00 AM
- I really enjoyed this fun piece, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:07:00 AM
Hugs back.
Date: 10/25/2017 11:31:00 PM
All this needs is a honky tonk piano in the background played by somebody like Harry 'the Hipster' Gibson and I'd be up and boogying myself, Richard. A great write, lovin' that style. Yo! Viv
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Viv.
Date: 10/25/2017 11:06:00 PM
You never fail to surprise me :D and I mean that in a good way. This is just so... unexpected! lol But it was fun to read... and I'll bet it was fun to write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:09:00 AM
It was, especially since I have not been that inspired to write for a while. Thanks for the great comment, hugs Rick.
Date: 10/25/2017 5:55:00 PM
Oh me oh my...this one is a sizzler. How did you come up with this hot piece. The must is on fire....That chorus is great running through...All I can think of is...how much energy does that Boogie Woogie man have?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:12:00 AM
First I thought Boogie Man and then the rest just came to me. I like your energy comment! ;0)
Date: 10/25/2017 3:55:00 PM
Sho 'nuff, bro! You hit the mark on this one, Richard. Loved the colloquial hip talk. Boogie Man sans the Woogie is a bad man for sure. Great inventive swing this poem has. Could easily be a song. Love and peace always.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thanks my friend, just a bit o silliness..
Date: 10/25/2017 3:50:00 PM
It takes all kinds to to make up our world. A rhythmic piece I can almost hear the music to. Great writing Richard! : )
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate the visit.
Date: 10/25/2017 3:42:00 PM
Excellent stuff, Richard. Enticing dialect and rhyme enhance this poem which unravels before our eyes like it's flowing out of a movie. ~ Regards // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Paul. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/25/2017 3:24:00 PM
You been drinking too much wine on your new dock! Cheers!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:18:00 AM
Nope, just some ice tea of the Manhathan Variety.
Date: 10/25/2017 2:19:00 PM
So funny, Richard. Really enjoyed this piece. // Barry
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2017 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Barry.
Date: 10/25/2017 1:19:00 PM
A great fun poem Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2017 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 10/25/2017 1:12:00 PM
Hi just dropped in to read some of your work and boy did I pick a hot one. It reminds me of one of the songs from the twenties. Not that I am that old lol! Good write stuck with the dialect straight through and there was a definite beat to it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2017 1:18:00 PM
Much appreciated Patricia, if you like period pieces you might enjoy a piece I wrote titled "Putting on the Ritz" Thanks again for the visit and comment.
Date: 10/25/2017 12:28:00 PM
At once thrilled then unnerved, the art of the pen :) xomo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2017 1:09:00 PM
Thanks for coming back.;0)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/25/2017 12:46:00 PM
Yeah... I had to go for my walk and come back to it. But I did! True art in my opinion elicits an emotional response. I'm not too PC to appreciate art.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2017 12:29:00 PM
Thanks Maureen. I thought perhaps I went too far based on the lack of responses to this piece.

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