Bones Ache Yet Heart Sings

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Today June 16 th is my Birthday

Today one more page is shorn off from the book of my life.
On this day of humble rejoicing, my heart brims with gratitude,
For I am granted one more year and the priceless gift of life,
When many young ones are destined to drop off from life unexpected. 

Under the shroud of darkness while many falter and flounder,
God has been guiding me all along, never letting me down with,
Hardships I can’t tide over or challenges I can’t confront. 
Besides, the love of my family and dear ones keeps me in good stead.

God has been my strength and my guide through all these years.
Though grown older now, He fills me with the fuel to move on
He keeps my cup full with his grace that I enjoy a serene peace
And each new morning to me is a fresh awakening.

I have lost the sheen of my eyes and the suppleness of my limbs.
My brittle bones ache, I can’t move as brisk as before.
But beneath the shell of my withering body and wrinkling skin
I still have a heart that sings, young as ever, not yet shrivelled.

With my sweet family and children around and the lovely people,
With whom I share my life, immensely blessed is how I feel.
I wish to move on in life sharing the gifts of my heart and mind,
Making myself convinced that I haven’t lived my life in vain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/3/2023 9:46:00 AM
Love these lines,'But beneath the shell of my withering body and wrinkling skin I still have a heart that sings, young as ever, not yet shrivelled.'. Great win.
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Date: 7/3/2023 6:37:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your contest top win with this lovely poem, dear Valsa.
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Date: 6/20/2023 1:24:00 AM
Belated birthday wishes, Valsa, great testimony here:)
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Date: 6/19/2023 7:16:00 PM
'Withering and wrinkling,' eh?! Better than my 'look' -- 'explanding and exploding!' Ain't the 'Golden Years' grand?! ~ Mr. America, 1971.
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Date: 6/18/2023 3:05:00 PM
Sorry for being so late to say, "Happy Birthday" my dear friend. Age wear us down, but God gives us hope. May this year brings love and comfort to you and those you love. Hugs my dear Valsa. Bill
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Date: 6/18/2023 2:52:00 PM
First a late "Happy Birthday Wish." What a powerful write. "Love It" Hope you day was wonderful. I also wrote on this one. Enjoy your day writing away..................
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Date: 6/18/2023 9:46:00 AM
Your poem is filled wih truths, Valsa. Love its constant, peacefuk and lyrical flow. I agree, as i’m 72 in ailing body, but jeep my brain at 35 for 90% of time. Blessings and inspirations…. sally
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Date: 6/16/2023 5:20:00 PM
your poem moved me, we can overcome loneliness in these precious verses, i could'nt do it, enjoyed
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Valsa George
Date: 6/17/2023 11:17:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks a lot dear yaan
Date: 6/16/2023 9:48:00 AM
Wow, nice thoughts. Happy Birthday, Valsa! You are as young as you feel, surrounding folks help.
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Date: 6/17/2023 11:16:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear poet friend for your birthday wishes . Glad you liked my poem. Sorry for my late response.
Date: 6/16/2023 8:31:00 AM
Happy Birthday, Valsa! Some people stay young at heart whilst others lose their heart while young. If we have God we have it all and yet God gives us more with family and friends. God bless you!
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Date: 6/17/2023 11:14:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Kim for your warm birthday wishes. You are right Kim, when God is with us, we feel greater energy in us and thus can remain young at heart. I should have responded earlier... !Have been quite busy. Sorry!
Date: 6/16/2023 6:38:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, You turned my wailing into dancing; you removed my sackcloth and clothed me with joy, that my heart may sing your praises and not be silent. Lord my God, I will praise you forever. Psalms 30:11?-?12 NIV What a blessing to read your poems and witness the Love of God flowing throughout the world in your love for all to come to know God for their heart to sing praises with serene peace, glad you have great family and what an example they have to pull them together in unity : )
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Date: 6/17/2023 11:08:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Stephan for the choice of the apt psalm for my special day. Yes, my heart overflows with gratitude for I am given a beautiful family and the Good Lord is by my side. Thanks again for your sweet Birthday wishes. Sorry I couldnot respond to your loving words as I have been busy with my children at home. Thanks once again for you are an inspiration to me
Date: 6/16/2023 5:38:00 AM
Happy Birthday, Valsa. A special poem for a special occasion. You are blessed with a loving heart and loving family. Sing on my friend and enjoy life.
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Valsa George
Date: 6/17/2023 11:02:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Vijay for your hearty wishes. Sorry I couldn't respond in time
Date: 6/16/2023 5:31:00 AM
Valsa, Your poem exudes a profound beauty, adorned with mesmerizing imagery. It flawlessly encapsulates the essence of the inexorable march of time, as each individual inevitably experiences their own designated moment, leaving no one unscathed. If this is not a work of fiction, I extend my heartfelt wishes for a joyous birthday and for many more prosperous years ahead.
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Date: 6/17/2023 11:00:00 PM
Much enjoyed your comment in your exquisite language. Thanks a lot dear friend for your warm birthday wishes. Sorry for the late response.
Date: 6/16/2023 2:06:00 AM
For a moment I thought it was your birthday. Your poem is lively and emotional. May you live a happy life.
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Date: 6/17/2023 10:57:00 PM
Yes, it has been my birthday ! Thanks for your lovely wishes, dear Victor. Sorry for the late response
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