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Bone Beach

Bone Beach 10-19-24 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bone Beach Over barren beachheads, Where ephemeral waves roil, Shattered tides Wonder of life left behind In empty wombs that once bore pearls. A cemetery of fleshless carrions remains In bleached bone To build conundrums of calcium, Birthed in youthful rings, In relics of festive gluttony Without tombstones. Abandoned Sanctuaries, exposed, Burn like bare flesh From raw rays of solar outrage. Expectant chrysalis of spiral greyness, Chilled in the journey of cochlear moons, Builds upon a barren shell a welcoming host For renewal rising from churning waves - A symbol of resurrection from stone sands. New life grows bones In grey dreams On cast-aways.

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Len Gasun

Date: 11/24/2024 5:50:00 AM

A marvelous poem my dearest poet Sam. I enjoyed this a lot. Big Congrats on your win! Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/24/2024 5:25:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend! I came to realize that the oyster and its empty shells are a metaphor for resurrection where new life builds on what seems to refuse! So glad you found joy in these words! Send you blessings of joy as we come into the season that celebrates the coming of new life in a manger!

Greg Gaul

Date: 11/23/2024 8:11:00 AM

Congrats dear one.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/23/2024 1:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear friend! So wonderful to hear from you! Sending you many blessings of inspiration!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/27/2024 6:51:00 AM

Oh my goodness Sam what a gem of a poem and how eloquently you describe the selfish but inevitable death of oysters by the same who flash the calcified inner contents on their finger, but emphasizing the hope of a resurrection of how someday, these oysters will once again survive and and yield within churning waves, and all because one shell will be carelessly discarded and thrown back into the ocean, to become a host. TRULY AMAZING POETRY. Blessings, Jennifer.

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/23/2024 6:59:00 PM

Your exquisite poem has just the right touch of imagery and emotion that draws one into its evocative world. A beauty! Enjoyed this one so much! :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/13/2024 10:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, Laura! It seems to me that sometimes life grows from the most unexpected places like new oysters on old oyster shells. Truly a miraculous part of ever renewing creation. What a plan! Sending you blessings and my appreciation!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/22/2024 12:53:00 AM

Excellent write dear Sam. Enjoyed reading your take on the contest. Loved the optimistic ending of renewal and resurrection. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs. ~ Ani

Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/13/2024 9:50:00 AM

Hi Ani, can you tell how far behind I am in responding to emails!!! Thank you for your lovely compliments! They warmed my heart. After giving this theme some thought I realized the oyster is a wonderful symbol of selflessness and renewal. Sending you all blessings..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2024 4:01:00 PM

Amazing imagery. I smell a winner!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/24/2024 10:55:00 AM

Hi Andrea! Many thanks and much gratitude coming your way. It took some time to pull the theme together but I have to admit I do like the result! Sending you blessings and my gratitude.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/21/2024 3:06:00 AM

i always enjoy your poetry, the writing is of a consistent high standard, and this poem is no exception..hope it does well in the contest, it's such an inspiring theme, and thanks for commenting on my work, much appreciated :)

Silent One

Date: 10/20/2024 1:06:00 PM

Hi Sam, I love how your poem evokes a haunting landscape where nature and time intertwine in a meditation on loss, renewal, and the cycles of life. The speaker presents a "barren" and desolate scene at a beach, where "ephemeral waves roil" — symbolizing the transience of life, with the tides serving as a metaphor for time's relentless march. The "empty wombs that once bore pearls" poignantly capture the idea of loss, gesturing toward something once precious now absent.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/20/2024 1:28:00 AM

Sometimes is hard to comment, I have no words, I just enjoyed reading beautiful poetry!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/24/2024 10:36:00 AM

Arthur, your message says so much! Thank you. I agree. Sometimes it is hard to comment so I appreciate your visit! Hope all is well! Sending you blessings and my gratitude!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/20/2024 12:04:00 AM

Dear samszy! Wow you did an exquisite take on this prompt with excellent diction that is so very fitting for the theme! I am impressed by your word weaving and how youv delivered this take! I especially love the lines “ A cemetery of fleshless carrions remains In bleached bone To build conundrums of calcium,” brilliant! And the way your poem ends too! You do dark poetry very well too dear samszy! Beautiful soul! You are such a talented poetess! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/24/2024 10:31:00 AM

Dearest Inky! Have read and re-read your beautiful message! It lifts my spirits and is so encouraging. Thank you! I love playing with words even in a "dark" subject. There were so many ways to go with this theme. Once I decided on the oyster everything seemed to fall into place. The way oysters grow on discarded oyster shells is truly miraculous and totally amazing! It is a true cycle of life with one generation giving life to the next. It is an immense joy to share poetry with you and soak in your words and the way to put them together. So grateful, dear friend. Blessings of rejuvenation to you!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/19/2024 8:08:00 PM

There is life within death- beautiful and deep thoughts, :) loved the flow, like the seas

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/19/2024 9:04:00 PM

Agreed! I love the way oyster shells are crucibles for new oysters. In Washington the oyster population was almost decimated because people took the oyster shells with them and there was no place for the little oysters to grow! There was a huge campaign to get people to throw the shells back on the beach and the oysters were saved! Sending you blessings!!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/19/2024 3:57:00 PM

Hello Sam What an interesting title. An amazing poem. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2024 11:08:00 AM

Hello Sam, i am glad you had fun to write this poem .I am happy to hear that the oysters were saved. the empty shells should be left alone not taken away. Hugs.Darlene/

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/19/2024 8:58:00 PM

Hi Darlene! Thank you so much for your visit and your wonderful feedback. The theme Anthony's contest was so intriguing. This was a fun one to think about and to write. So glad you enjoyed it! Hugs and blessings!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/19/2024 8:48:00 PM

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