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Just having a dry spell and some thoughts from out on the porch..Sara
The well that once had a spring is bone-dry Rain torrential flow_water the cracked clay Let the well fill with fresh water mile high Then spring that comes forth will be gold assay Just jewels of love will be given by muse Jewels like Lovers' Knot crown royal Help me to not in anyway gift misuse Fill the well full with love above all Muse visit me today as the bees hum Visiting the Holly, Pear, Oak enjoy The nectar of flowers to feed upon As lazily cotton puff clouds float with joy Swiftly hand did pen twelve lines of beauty Love flows, thoughts flow sharing spring joy duty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/16/2012 4:34:00 PM
Beautiful nature.Beautiful story poem,nice in form. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 3/14/2012 7:35:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the smile.. enjoyed your comment.. rain will.fill that well again .. your imagery says so at the bottom of your poem...love it..pd..
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Date: 3/14/2012 4:09:00 AM
a lilting piece, sara.. makes my heart sing with your well-expressed sonnet..a winning toast of for a contest.. am loving how karter grows day by day!..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:52:00 PM
Beautiful Nature, beautiful Sonnet poem, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:58:00 PM
You bring to mind that water is the gift to life. Terrible to be without it. Nice one 'sara.
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Date: 3/13/2012 4:22:00 PM
very refreshing, i really like the tone of this poem. Thanx i enjoy reading it.
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Date: 3/13/2012 3:14:00 PM
There is a well of love in this poem, Sara. Like the way you just can't get enough spring time in this piece. It overflows - that's not a criticism. Love, daver
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:55:00 PM
Love this beautiful sonnet, Sara
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:35:00 PM
A joy to read Sara thank you so much , Best wishes Declan xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:13:00 AM
i love the natural images that your poem invokes as well as a sense of peace after the storm excellent writing
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Date: 3/12/2012 6:18:00 PM
This is very descriptive and nice; I can imagine all of this. I like the title too - very interesting. I hope all is well and keep up the excellent work! Always, Laura
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