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Bon Voyage, Joan

Bon Voyage, Joan

I wish you had a laptop
to take with you on your cruise.
So you could write and say to us
“Good Morning.  How are yous?”

It was not very long ago 
that we had never met.
But, quickly we have come to know
our friendship is a great asset.

Reciprocating a kindly word, 
we introduced our pets.
To others that might seem absurd,
we have done so with no regrets.

Whether walking in the forest
or down those country roads
We know and love a fun brunette
although she chases toads.

(To keep her “Bear” 
from eating them…
She does so with great care.
No frogs allowed; he is her gem.)

But you do not have a laptop,
to take with you on your cruise.
So go have fun, sing; dance ‘til you drop. 
We shall wait to hear cruise news.


© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    January 18, 2010

Poetic form: Quatrain
 
Dedicated to our friend named Joan.  Bon voyage!  
(But come home soon even if it is too cold…)  LOL

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/18/2010 9:26:00 AM
Good write friend... Keep em comin.....:JP]
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:05:00 AM
I hope Joan has a wonderful cruise. My friend is going to Mexico for 6 weeks but she is taking her lap top to keep in touch. Hope her weather is great. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/18/2010 4:18:00 AM
Nice quatrain, one of my favorite forms, Joan will love this dedication...Raul
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