Bohol Beach Bonfire

The wiggling whiff of smoke stings my eyes, 

         so I try to stoke back to life the buried embers.
         Now tiny tongues of flame sway, twist and wriggle 
         like snakes through parched leaves, devouring twigs,
         even sooty pieces of brittle rocks and pebbles.



As the dusk broods, darkens and deepens into night,

         my shadow shivers and shrivels away behind me.
         I gaze at the darkness beyond the dancing bonfire:
         the calls of unseen cuckoos and the ticktack tapping 
         of a faraway woodpecker have all died down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 8:36 AM
Unique.
Goff Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 4:14 AM
Romeo, love the time-lapse wistful thoughts! great poem! Jim
O'Donnell Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 12:53 AM
Nice serene picture of a peaceful Caribbean island shore. Kathleen
Townsend Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 12:22 AM
Great imagery here... I really like this one. Very serene. Smiles from Lolita
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