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Bogey Man

Thinking I knew you from your smile you wormed your way in with guile my bete noire*, my bogey man long of tooth and without a clan I let you in, a worm with style. le grand faux pas*, angel vile, seeming weak, yet, so versatile. Hobgoblin of dread, bogey man Thinking I knew Shrink back now into your defile of sagging skin and toothy smile. But, I have seen a reviled hand and my open heart still here stands wishing sweetness all the while Thinking I knew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2012 8:25:00 PM
very good,,,,, I think most of us know someone like this,,,, and we open the door anyway,,,,, have a blessed day Debbie ;}
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Date: 5/20/2012 1:04:00 PM
Ooooh, I like this one a lot Debbie!
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Date: 5/17/2012 12:32:00 PM
Mercy! So cool!
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:45:00 PM
love this one, Debs - especially hobgoblin of dread. many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 5/16/2012 8:49:00 AM
another great piece from a super creative poetess .. the idea of a "boogyman" frightened me for years as a child ..but then I grew up.. haha.. now he is afraid of me..luv.. how u been?
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Date: 5/16/2012 8:49:00 AM
another great piece from a super creative poetess .. the idea of a "boogyman" frightened me for years as a child ..but then I grew up.. haha.. now he is afraid of me..luv.. how u been?
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Date: 5/15/2012 9:05:00 PM
Hmmm, does bete noir mean bogey man?? That was the phrase I was unfamiliar with. You sure did a very interesting one and I love the rondeau style you chose, Debs! Oooh, that bogey man!!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/16/2012 6:56:00 AM
yes bete noir can mean bogey man/ black night...
Date: 5/15/2012 7:44:00 PM
ahhhh! :) Breath-taking! this is awsome, Debbie! I love the depth...perfect use of the french phrases....all Brilliantly done...:) big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/15/2012 4:29:00 PM
...."Smile ~ I Think I'd Worry More About, 'Big Foot,' Than The Boogey Man; 'Actually, My Luv.'" *
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Date: 5/15/2012 4:26:00 PM
...."Smile ~ I Think I'd Worry More About, 'Big Foot,' Than The Bogey Man; 'Actually, My Luv.'" *
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