Bogey Man

Thinking I knew you from your smile
you wormed your way in with guile
my bete noire*, my bogey man
long of tooth and without a clan 
I let you in, a worm with style.

le grand faux pas*, angel vile,
seeming weak, yet, so versatile.
Hobgoblin of dread, bogey man 
Thinking I knew

Shrink back now into your defile
of sagging skin and toothy smile.
But, I have seen a reviled hand
and my open heart still here stands
wishing sweetness all the while
Thinking I knew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/21/2012 8:25:00 PM
very good,,,,, I think most of us know someone like this,,,, and we open the door anyway,,,,, have a blessed day Debbie ;}
Login to Reply
Date: 5/20/2012 1:04:00 PM
Ooooh, I like this one a lot Debbie!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/17/2012 12:32:00 PM
Mercy! So cool!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2012 12:45:00 PM
love this one, Debs - especially hobgoblin of dread. many congrats on your wins : )
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2012 8:49:00 AM
another great piece from a super creative poetess .. the idea of a "boogyman" frightened me for years as a child ..but then I grew up.. haha.. now he is afraid of me..luv.. how u been?
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2012 8:49:00 AM
another great piece from a super creative poetess .. the idea of a "boogyman" frightened me for years as a child ..but then I grew up.. haha.. now he is afraid of me..luv.. how u been?
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2012 9:05:00 PM
Hmmm, does bete noir mean bogey man?? That was the phrase I was unfamiliar with. You sure did a very interesting one and I love the rondeau style you chose, Debs! Oooh, that bogey man!!
Login to Reply
Guzzi Avatar
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/16/2012 6:56:00 AM
yes bete noir can mean bogey man/ black night...
Date: 5/15/2012 7:44:00 PM
ahhhh! :) Breath-taking! this is awsome, Debbie! I love the depth...perfect use of the french phrases....all Brilliantly done...:) big hugs, love ya deb
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2012 4:29:00 PM
...."Smile ~ I Think I'd Worry More About, 'Big Foot,' Than The Boogey Man; 'Actually, My Luv.'" *
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2012 4:26:00 PM
...."Smile ~ I Think I'd Worry More About, 'Big Foot,' Than The Bogey Man; 'Actually, My Luv.'" *
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter