Bogey Man

Thinking I knew you from your smile
you wormed your way in with guile
my bete noire*, my bogey man
long of tooth and without a clan 
I let you in, a worm with style.

le grand faux pas*, angel vile,
seeming weak, yet, so versatile.
Hobgoblin of dread, bogey man 
Thinking I knew

Shrink back now into your defile
of sagging skin and toothy smile.
But, I have seen a reviled hand
and my open heart still here stands
wishing sweetness all the while
Thinking I knew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 8:25 PM
very good,,,,, I think most of us know someone like this,,,, and we open the door anyway,,,,, have a blessed day Debbie ;}
Salama  Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Ooooh, I like this one a lot Debbie!
Hunter Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 12:32 PM
Mercy! So cool!
Horne Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 12:45 PM
love this one, Debs - especially hobgoblin of dread. many congrats on your wins : )
Sweetheart Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 8:49 AM
another great piece from a super creative poetess .. the idea of a "boogyman" frightened me for years as a child ..but then I grew up.. haha.. now he is afraid of me..luv.. how u been?
Sweetheart Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 8:49 AM
another great piece from a super creative poetess .. the idea of a "boogyman" frightened me for years as a child ..but then I grew up.. haha.. now he is afraid of me..luv.. how u been?
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:05 PM
Hmmm, does bete noir mean bogey man?? That was the phrase I was unfamiliar with. You sure did a very interesting one and I love the rondeau style you chose, Debs! Oooh, that bogey man!!
Guzzi Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 6:56 AM
yes bete noir can mean bogey man/ black night...
Burch Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 7:44 PM
ahhhh! :) Breath-taking! this is awsome, Debbie! I love the depth...perfect use of the french phrases....all Brilliantly done...:) big hugs, love ya deb
Rhinem Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 4:29 PM
...."Smile ~ I Think I'd Worry More About, 'Big Foot,' Than The Boogey Man; 'Actually, My Luv.'" *
Rhinem Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 4:26 PM
...."Smile ~ I Think I'd Worry More About, 'Big Foot,' Than The Bogey Man; 'Actually, My Luv.'" *
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