Avery Won Poet Pantoum

Body and Mind Eclipse

Total body and mind eclipse
I dream for us to live that way
For when I gaze upon your lips
Be still, it takes my breath away

I dream for us to live that way
Surpassing every tender song
Be still, it takes my breath away
Our passion burns forever strong

Surpassing every tender song
I shall not speak another word
Our passion burns forever strong
Deep in the night, our story's heard

I shall not speak another word
For when I gaze upon your lips
Deep in the night, our story's heard
Total body and mind eclipse

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Jan Allison September 20, 2017 at 11:03 AM What a delightful pantoum I really enjoy this form, congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2017 at 8:43 PM Simple and lovely! Congrats, Avery!

Juli- Michelle June 27, 2017 at 1:35 PM Congratulations on your fourth place win in my rhyme battle contest! Love, Juli-Michelle