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Body and Mind Eclipse

Total body and mind eclipse I dream for us to live that way For when I gaze upon your lips Be still, it takes my breath away I dream for us to live that way Surpassing every tender song Be still, it takes my breath away Our passion burns forever strong Surpassing every tender song I shall not speak another word Our passion burns forever strong Deep in the night, our story's heard I shall not speak another word For when I gaze upon your lips Deep in the night, our story's heard Total body and mind eclipse

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Date: 9/20/2017 11:03:00 AM
What a delightful pantoum I really enjoy this form, congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/27/2017 8:43:00 PM
Simple and lovely! Congrats, Avery!
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Date: 6/27/2017 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your fourth place win in my rhyme battle contest! Love, Juli-Michelle
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