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Bobby Bubble

My home is in the atmosphere, my name is Bobby Bubble Everywhere I float around, I always get in trouble I floated passed a tree one day, to visit Dr. Seuss But sitting in the tree I passed, was Mrs. Mother Goose I asked her if she knew where Dr. Seuss was... And if she had seen him around She replied, "I think he went that-a-way cuz" Then she pointed to the ground I waited for the wind to blow... so that I can catch a ride But it blew towards a cave of bats And it carried me inside A thousand eyes were looking at me As I floated all alone I was scared, I wanted out I wanted to get home A thousand wings have fluttered And it caused the wind to swirl It blew me round and round so fast You should have seen me twirl The wind was fierce and pushed me out Then I landed in some rubble Things got a little worse, when I had burst... And split- now I have a double A Fairy Tale For Children - New Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper 2-13-2019

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Date: 2/25/2019 8:53:00 AM
Lovely poem Charles - congratulations on your winning poem Charles a wonderful fairy tale! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/24/2019 10:22:00 AM
OMG! What a treasure this one is! I could envision everything you described. I loved the thousand eyes that were looking at him. I just pictured solid black, and a thousand little glowing eyes, wondering who this person was interfering with their, "hang time". Loved it! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/24/2019 4:38:00 AM
Thank you, Charles, for entering my , “A Fairy Tale for Children” contest. Great story with colorful imagery and feeling. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Stop by and visit my blog.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/20/2019 3:59:00 PM
I totally enjoyed this...you are an artist with words and images, Charles. A delight. Panagoita Romios.
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Date: 2/13/2019 11:33:00 PM
This is darling, and so much fun to read, I found myself chanting it like a Dr. Seuss poem!
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Date: 2/13/2019 9:59:00 PM
the 5th stanza is just scrumptious! Bravo!
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Date: 2/13/2019 9:17:00 PM
Wonderful imagination! :)
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:23:00 PM
this is SO good for that contest. Wonderfully done!!
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Date: 2/13/2019 7:35:00 PM
The boy in the poetic bubble...how are you my poetic bro?... a great fairy tale...best for a win Charles...happy endings...^WW^
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Charles Messina
Date: 2/13/2019 7:40:00 PM
Nice to hear from you WW All is well my friend. Thanks for the uplift. ~CM~
Date: 2/13/2019 3:30:00 PM
This is such great work you are really creative, keep up the good work. Looking forward to reading more. Thank for entertaining me in such a delightful way.
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Charles Messina
Date: 2/13/2019 7:42:00 PM
Hey Michael, I really appreciate your fine comments and your visits. Happy to entertain my friend. Keep penning! Charlie
Date: 2/13/2019 1:54:00 PM
This is great! excellent job Charles!
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Charles Messina
Date: 2/13/2019 2:51:00 PM
Thank you, Bobby. And thanks for your visit :)

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