Bob Cratchit's Trick

Bob Cratchit, while slaving late alone
Tricked his boss by posting a framed clone
Of Ebenezer loaded with Yuletide cash,
Which was really the miser’s hidden stash!



Andrea Dietrich's A Christmas Character Clerihew Contest
12/09/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 26, 2014 at 10:56 PM
NETTE, Congratulations on your "Christmas Character Clerihew" :) LINDA
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 9:53 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette Blessings and Merry Christmas
Haight Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Hi Nette, loved your poem, especially since we went to see "A Christmas Carol" at a local church this evening. Poor Bob Cratchit...well done! Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 8:22 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Nette
Kayode Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:52 AM
I like your humor,congrats on the win nette...huggs
Mehta Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:32 AM
Nice humor on Bob, congratulations on the win, nette
Allison Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 4:30 AM
very clever Nette many congrats:-) hugs jan x
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 1:18 AM
Nette, this is an unusual story of what Bob might do!! Congrats in my contest. Hope you have a merry Christmas this year.
Austin Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Serves the old fart right. Hope Bob put another coal on the fire. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
Sirak Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:09 PM
This is a fine verse! Even if he wasn't scrooge before he would be when his cash was gone.
Callus Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 8:43 AM
Well done Nette...and Bob!! Very enjoyable clerihew. // May I wish you a happy Christmas and all the very best for 2015. Hugs // paul
Callus Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 7:35 AM
...and back with congratulations!:)
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Really cute. Good luck in the contest Nette
Carroll Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:27 AM
An entertaining write Nette!
Mara Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:17 AM
Hurrah for Bob! I had a great time with this ' wicked' clerihew and liked the last line a lot!
Macmillan Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 9:52 PM
Funny! Ha!!! Checking in with you... I know a bad storm has hit the Philippines, but that they moved people from the worst of it... 23 died... but I hear that there was a great deal of damage. Praying for you, your country and your loved ones. Nature has gone crazy. Love sent.. Your Soul Sis
Paras Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 2:28 PM
I can visualize Bob trying to get even with Scrooge. It's about time! A humorous box-office hit for me, Nette.
Arana Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 1:20 PM
Hah! Now trhe tables are turned in favor of Bob. Very witty of you; a grand poem, Nette
Hamilton Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 12:06 PM
so funny Nette a wonderful pen gl in contest hugs
Meade Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:06 AM
Nice!! An updated version of the Bob -- would love to see your creativity at updating the whole story!
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 4:04 AM
- Well done ..... i love it .... :)))) - Good luck in contest, Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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