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Boats of Shame

Bring your guns Bring your boats Boats filled with ghosts Boats weighted with chains Chains that will one day break Chains that will carry Carry us to Zion Carry our pain Pain born of separation Pain that preceded Preceded our birth Preceded our rising Rising here within a new nation Rising for we know Know that Ja is merciful Know that Abraham smiles Smiles upon the righteous Smiles though our tears Tears that lift Tears of joy Joy born Joy gained in freedom Freedom that we took Freedom we reclaimed Reclaimed by us a strong people Reclaimed by transcendent men Men of purpose Men who are Ja's chosen people People who know our purpose People who cry Cry for our babies Cry for Mother Mother Africa Mother of all children Children who ripped from her Children who grew pale Pale as papyrus Pale for they lack compassion Compassion died Compassion exchanged for greed Greed that intoxicated Greed for flesh Flesh of coco Flesh subjegated to their wanting Wanting more power Wanting things to stay the same Same for us men Same promise to set free Free Men For Marugu MO's "Race Relations Contest".

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Date: 6/9/2016 10:03:00 AM
Excellent blitz, Richard. Congratulations on your win. ~karam~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2016 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Karak
Date: 6/9/2016 8:57:00 AM
Fantastic use of metaphor, such a well written expression. Congratulations!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2016 1:50:00 PM
Thanks Dineen, much appreciated.
Date: 5/26/2016 9:27:00 AM
I can see I will be learning quite a bit form your writing Richard! Know that I will be reading your work :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2016 9:33:00 AM
You are kind, thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/26/2016 12:56:00 AM
The way you wrote this blitz was masterfully done, with great flow. Though very despairing and vivid with the scene of the slave ship, it didn't overpower the small rays of hope sprinkled through out. I was never able to make those last two words of the blitz form make a lot of sense, but even there, you pulled it off. A FAVE for its power and its history.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2016 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Timothy, I appreciate you reading one of my older ones.
Date: 5/9/2016 7:49:00 AM
Wow! This poem and your ability to have written it blow me away.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2016 8:02:00 AM
What a nice thing to say Mark. Thanks.
Date: 5/7/2016 6:29:00 PM
I came to read this again, sometimes is hard to put in words why a poem resonates with you, ironic for a writer I know, but sometimes true!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2016 7:51:00 PM
Hi Arthur, thanks for giving it another read.
Date: 5/6/2016 8:14:00 PM
You did awesome with message and form, hugs xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/7/2016 10:57:00 AM
Thanks and a big hug back.
Date: 5/5/2016 10:11:00 PM
Now thats a mouthful, great write, and a poem one could contemplate for hours upon hours! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2016 7:44:00 PM
Thanks Arthur, an hour will be fine.;0)
Date: 5/5/2016 8:18:00 PM
Wow, I've been blitzed with POWERFUL words. Loved the symbol of the boat and all it implies. How it all comes down to just let us all have our freedom. Did the contest have to be Blitz? I should check it out.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2016 7:45:00 PM
It was the preferred form so I gave it a go. I haven't done many of these.
Date: 5/5/2016 3:17:00 PM
:) You always have a way of turning the difficult into easy. This type of poetry is so hard for me to manage, but you did manage and come up with a worth while topic to boot. I'm so impressed by your word finesse. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/6/2016 2:48:00 PM
Hugs back, crazy busy so just a quick response.
Date: 5/5/2016 1:44:00 PM
- Really wonderful, Richard - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2016 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise. Hugs Rick.
Date: 5/4/2016 10:13:00 PM
Though this form I've only seen once, this write is powerful, informative and deeply felt to the heart! The more I read it, the more I feel it's impact!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2016 11:22:00 PM
What a great comment Walter. I tried my best to put myself in the right frame of mind to take on the persona of those who were ripped from their homes.
Date: 5/4/2016 12:17:00 PM
Hello Rick, A Most Excellent commentary which is quite moving and exactly to the point. (I've never tried one of these blitz writes before. Looks interesting.) A "7" absolutely!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2016 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Gary, much appreciated.
Date: 5/4/2016 7:42:00 AM
The links in this Blitz were very nicely interwoven, Rick. I've yet to try this form, but I'm inspired by your write. Thanks.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/4/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Lin.

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