Boatless

BOATLESS My cries are boatless My cries are bootless In the white waves of the ocean I might twist and wash in motion But wish for the might of One who saves In the wide ocean of waves

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Richard Palmer

Date: 8/13/2012 12:58:00 PM

don't wish,pray,all your cries will be washed away in the white waves,great write Sidney

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2012 12:43:00 PM

KC.. well this one is likewise a departure from your usual poetic terrain.. simple yet it speaks volumes all by itself!... love the mellow part of you ( this compliment is free of charge; i didn't know my pieces were sensual?.. go ask freud, lol!)..:) winning wishes!..:) huggs!