Get Your Premium Membership

Boat Ride On the Chilika Lake

The boatman jabbered, “Ten rupees for each, For a cool ride down the Chilika Lake”, We egged on the elders, their child within, The wooden boat, barely a few feet long, Holding hands, brown and sturdy we climbed on, Through the obtuse bending, welcomed us warm, The boatman oars, stirs still waters about, Tall grasses tickle the sides of the boat, Nudging it slow, out of the serene shore, The soft mud surfaced, soon bubbled away, A leaf large of lotus gladly made way, The frog caught lounging, swiftly dived away, The evening sky, bright orange and gleaming, A beautiful sun preparing to ease, Right under the horizon, cackling geese, Jellyfish soaring to breathe in the play, White bodies against transient amber haze, Surrounding our boat to pay their homage Graceful ivory cranes, their young and new, Downy feathers fluff, their eyes start to droop, In the tangerine sundown, sight to scoop, The bank reached, the journey hypnotic, As the beauty of nature, exotic, A mystic boat ride on Chilika Lake!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/17/2014 12:36:00 AM
the reader can actually feel the boatride--not an easy thing to do. what a pleasure to read this piece! Victoria
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2014 3:52:00 PM
this is some gorgeous descriptive writing. I think you are new? WElcome to Soup.
Login to Reply
Chandra Avatar
Sudha Chandra
Date: 11/11/2014 8:32:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, yes am new to poetrysoup and enjoying every bit of being here!
Date: 11/9/2014 10:19:00 AM
truly very beautifully painted piece sudha
Login to Reply
Chandra Avatar
Sudha Chandra
Date: 11/11/2014 8:32:00 PM
Thanks Liam!
Date: 11/8/2014 4:55:00 AM
Very nice description - I loved it! Sneha
Login to Reply
Chandra Avatar
Sudha Chandra
Date: 11/11/2014 8:32:00 PM
thanks Sneha!
Date: 10/26/2014 6:06:00 AM
Hi Sudha, I had been there in 2010 and as I read your description of Chilka, it just took me back there.I really liked this write.////// Archana from Delhi.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/25/2014 8:22:00 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I wish you happy writings, my friend! Pandita
Login to Reply
Date: 10/22/2014 5:22:00 AM
that is so pretty and hypnotic, you really brought me there
Login to Reply
Date: 10/21/2014 7:58:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sudha - I choose your first lovely written poem in rhyme :)) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things