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BOAT grounded black and blue aged with ebon clouds water’s edge reminisce slow return to heaven’s light “Shekinah Glory in lifeboat” 6/5/2022 Pyramids Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May HMS

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Date: 6/22/2022 8:19:00 PM
Love your take of the contest, Kim. Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. God bless my friend
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2022 8:27:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 6/21/2022 12:44:00 AM
Awesome poem. Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Kim! Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2022 5:16:00 AM
Thank you, Len!
Date: 6/18/2022 8:20:00 AM
Shekhinah! I had to look this one up. Beautifully penned, Kim, congrats on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2022 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 6/18/2022 7:32:00 AM
Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2022 6:26:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 6/7/2022 3:43:00 PM
Eloquent poem, Kim. A lot to think about in a few lines. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2022 4:20:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 6/7/2022 9:31:00 AM
Vividly descriptive and moving, Kim. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2022 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 6/6/2022 8:25:00 PM
Great pic-poem combo. Quite an intriguing association there -- boat and Shechina! Only a poet can show it...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2022 5:41:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 6/6/2022 2:50:00 AM
Brilliantly constructed pyramid.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2022 4:59:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! ~ hugs
Date: 6/5/2022 10:06:00 PM
The last line is stunning, Kim !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2022 5:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa!

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