Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

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Boat

BOAT
grounded
black and blue

aged with ebon clouds
water’s edge reminisce
slow return to heaven’s light

“Shekinah Glory in lifeboat”

6/5/2022
Pyramids Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
HMS

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Eve Roper June 22, 2022 at 8:19 PM Love your take of the contest, Kim. Congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. God bless my friend Kim Rodrigues June 22, 2022 at 8:27 PM Thank you, Eve!

Len Gasun June 21, 2022 at 12:44 AM Awesome poem. Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Kim! Hugs Kim Rodrigues June 21, 2022 at 5:16 AM Thank you, Len!

Unseeking Seeker June 18, 2022 at 8:20 AM Shekhinah! I had to look this one up. Beautifully penned, Kim, congrats on your win Kim Rodrigues June 18, 2022 at 6:26 PM Thank you, my friend!

Joseph May June 18, 2022 at 7:32 AM Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win Kim Rodrigues June 18, 2022 at 6:26 PM Thank you, Joe!

Bill Baker June 7, 2022 at 3:43 PM Eloquent poem, Kim. A lot to think about in a few lines. Bill Kim Rodrigues June 7, 2022 at 4:20 PM Thank you, Bill!

Janice Canerdy June 7, 2022 at 9:31 AM Vividly descriptive and moving, Kim. Janice Kim Rodrigues June 7, 2022 at 4:21 PM Thank you, Janice!

Gershon Wolf June 6, 2022 at 8:25 PM Great pic-poem combo. Quite an intriguing association there -- boat and Shechina! Only a poet can show it... Kim Rodrigues June 7, 2022 at 5:41 AM Thank you, Gershon!

Victor Buhagiar June 6, 2022 at 2:50 AM Brilliantly constructed pyramid. Kim Rodrigues June 6, 2022 at 4:59 AM Thank you, my friend! ~ hugs

Valsa George June 5, 2022 at 10:06 PM The last line is stunning, Kim ! Kim Rodrigues June 6, 2022 at 5:00 AM Thank you so much, Valsa!