Blush

pink tipped yellow roses in full bloom-- the blush of first love becomes you 5/8/15 Entered in PD's 100 in a Row #2 contest

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Seosamh De Burca

Date: 7/9/2016 8:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win with a beautiful Tanka

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2016 11:28:00 AM

Thank you, Seosamh!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/8/2016 4:14:00 AM

Awesome!! Congrats Kim, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2016 11:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, Teddy!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2016 1:40:00 PM

Hi Kim, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2016 11:27:00 AM

Thank you for my placement, Linda!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2015 4:09:00 PM

this is REALLY good, and I do not say that lightly when it comes to tanka, sweetie!! Seven

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/16/2015 12:56:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! This means a lot to me!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/10/2015 1:35:00 AM

Words that compete with the flower's shades in this fine Tanka Kim! Outstanding!

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/12/2015 12:39:00 AM

Connie, thank you for your encouraging words!

Constance La France

Date: 5/9/2015 5:01:00 PM

Kim, lovely in a few words, 7 and thanks for visiting my flower poem

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/12/2015 12:38:00 AM

Thank you, Constance, and you are welcome!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/9/2015 3:35:00 AM

Lovely, Kim. This is Eileen. I enjoyed your tanka very much. :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/12/2015 12:36:00 AM

Thank you, Eileen! I'm glad you liked it.

Wally Flint

Date: 5/8/2015 8:47:00 PM

Very nice Kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/12/2015 12:35:00 AM

Thank you, Wally!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/8/2015 8:20:00 PM

this is lovely, kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 5/12/2015 12:34:00 AM

Thank you, Ilene!