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driving back home to you
in late night november rain
been thinking of everything
we’ve been through you and i

our song comes on the radio drowning
the hum of wipers against the windshield
as rain blurs the fleeting neon lights
or is it the memory of you blurring my eyes



AP: 2nd place 2021

Posted on May 22, 2021

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Date: 5/25/2021 8:59:00 AM
Imagery in verse nicely expressed; memories and tears listening to "our song."
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/25/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thanks, Dennis ~
Date: 5/22/2021 6:18:00 PM
Very well penned Line, superb imagery
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2021 11:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad ~

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