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Blurr (8 Years Old, Quickly Revised)

Poetry is my passion, But love is ever-lasting It never dies, Just remains on the inside trapped in. I travel back to taste your lips pressed against mine, Stuck for the moment, then a prisoner to present time. All that I wished was to remain how we were, Now I write these rhymes with my eyes in a blurr.

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Date: 8/28/2009 12:52:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Invisable. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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