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Bluewing Falling

Her magic is drawn from an ocean's million hues reflecting boundless skies slain by her trembling perfection you grab hold of her to save yourself and you do not mean her any harm you just want to feel what azure feels like to experience the depths of cerulean but her cobalt dust rubs off all over you your being indelibly indigo stained as the beauty you wished to possess lays crushed at your feet July 13th, 2018

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/14/2018 7:25:00 AM

Coming back with (belated) congrats. Glad to see this again.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/14/2018 7:49:00 AM

Thank you Agnes, that means a lot to me, xomo

Manmath Dalei

Date: 8/9/2018 6:49:00 AM

Outstanding poetry. Loved it.....//Manmath

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/9/2018 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Manmath! I'm stunned and warmed by the response to this piece :) xomo!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/7/2018 5:06:00 PM

Almost there ..chasing the #1 spot on best poems chart..congrats Maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/7/2018 7:34:00 PM

Ha! Giggles, a girl can dream! I made it there once for a day ;) Thank you Vijay! xomo

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/7/2018 10:07:00 AM

Back again to congratulate you for your win again! Well done!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/7/2018 12:20:00 PM

Ah thank you Susan! Two out of three ain't bad ;)) Cheers lovely! xomo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/5/2018 4:49:00 PM

This amazing piece is so original, provocative and outstanding Mo! A joy to read. Congratulations on your top win! : )

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/5/2018 7:29:00 PM

That's a lot of love :))) Thank You so much Connie! xomo <3

Robertina B.

Date: 8/5/2018 12:09:00 PM

Many congratulations Maureen.. Such a breathtaking free verse.. Beautiful and serene! Blessings to you!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/5/2018 1:27:00 PM

Thank you Robertina! Warm hugs :) xomo!

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/5/2018 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations Maureen...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/5/2018 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Charlie :) xomo!

Lu Loo

Date: 8/5/2018 11:07:00 AM

the BLUE contest had such great entries and this was one of them, great imagery and beautifully expressed sweet Maureen :) Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your top placement. :)-luloo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/5/2018 11:34:00 AM

Thank you Luloo! I'm thrilled :) sunshine and hugs!! xomo

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/5/2018 9:40:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS! A pleasure to read such creative and deep poetry my good friend.. A fav...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/5/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend! Warm thoughts and hugs dear Robert :) xomo!

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/2/2018 11:25:00 PM

stunning penning - love it

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/3/2018 6:14:00 AM

Thank you so much! Stunned myself with this one, owe it to the contest prompt ;) xomo!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/1/2018 12:30:00 PM

Ahh, such a brilliant and charming poem this is truly a joy to read and certainly a fav for me, I see that it has won 1st position in a contest, So many congratulations to you and your poem is plaves as No 2 on best new poems list, so congratulations for that as well, good luck and have a really nice day

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/1/2018 1:14:00 PM

Wow! Thank you Faraz! I didn't know it had soared to #2 :)) Thank you for the fave! I'm really pleased with this piece, it got an n/a in the contest it was written for, goes to show ya how subjective our art is. It's the occasional contest that seems to bring out the romantic side I usually hide ;) A wonderful day to you my friend! xomo

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/26/2018 2:41:00 AM

What a charming and gorgeous write, Mo, so full of color and expression ... I am never disappointed when I click on a poem of yours, and always enriched at the close! Lovely and intelligent write, as always Dear Friend! :-) <3

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/26/2018 7:55:00 AM

Thank you Greg! I surprised myself with this one. I've been wanting to know what you would think of this piece, valuing your input as I do <3 I hope you are well my friend, xomo <3

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/24/2018 10:28:00 PM

Your poem is simply stunning in its breathtaking beauty, Maureen. Full of heartfelt depth and artistry. Loved it! Belated congratulations. Warmest wishes my lovely.. ~Susan <3

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/25/2018 7:41:00 PM

Thank you Susan! I'm a little stunned with this piece myself ;) love and hugs <3 xomo!

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/20/2018 11:30:00 PM

awesome poem , I love the way you worked the words into your poem! Congratulations!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/21/2018 6:21:00 AM

Thank you Becca! I'm really pleased with how this one came together :) xomo!

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/20/2018 11:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win. Wow! Imagery and word phrasing excellent. Enjoyed this and admire it. :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/21/2018 6:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan! I'm thrilled with how it turned out, I owe it to Dale for the prompt :)) xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/20/2018 9:31:00 PM

Maureen, congratulations on your well written poem. The content and imagery is just beautiful. Have a nice weekend. :) Hugs Eve

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/21/2018 6:17:00 AM

Thank you Eve, a lovely weekend to you! :)) xomo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/20/2018 5:08:00 PM

Congrats Maureen on your first place win..superbly done.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/20/2018 6:50:00 PM

Thank you Vijay (I typo'd and predictive text wanted to call you aviary :) A lovely weekend to you! xomo

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/19/2018 1:16:00 PM

love the title and especially the last stanza, overall a great piece-

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/19/2018 1:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Michelle! It didn't place in the contest which inspired it but I think it's some of my finest work, I'm thrilled with it :)) Cheers! xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/19/2018 5:35:00 AM

This poem deserved a win! You surpassed any challenge, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/19/2018 6:39:00 AM

Aw thank you Karen, I was admittedly a little crushed, I felt this was one of those rare "wow, I wrote that?" pieces. ;) love and hugs my friend, xomo

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/19/2018 1:35:00 AM

Congratulations, Maureen on your win.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/19/2018 6:34:00 AM

Thank you Subimal, a lovely day to you x

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/17/2018 9:56:00 AM

You are an accomplished artist...this poem was innovative, captivating, entertaining and three dimensional in character. Well done my friend, Emile.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/17/2018 10:58:00 AM

Thank you Emile, your kind words greatly appreciated; this garnered me an N/A in the contest for which it was written, I was beginning to doubt myself ;) A lovely day to you my friend, xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2018 5:51:00 PM

this is SO fantastic. I am seeing many superb poems that had entered this contest. no win???

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/17/2018 10:55:00 AM

No, no win.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/16/2018 8:21:00 PM

Thank you :)) I'm thrilled with it and it wouldn't be without the prompt. xomo!

Chris Hagy

Date: 7/15/2018 8:46:00 PM

Wow this is a really different take on blue! A rather exotic write Maureen...perhaps this is how the beings in "Avatar" became blue :0 haha, have a good one :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/16/2018 7:28:00 AM

Pretty exotic for me huh ;) you may have something there, though I doubt they killed anything to get their smurfy hue. xomo!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/14/2018 4:59:00 AM

You took this theme to the next level. Maureen, your kind of blues excite the senses!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/14/2018 11:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Lyric Man! The muse doth surprise sometimes. xomo

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 7/14/2018 3:57:00 AM

Mournful and sensuous, excellent piece.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/14/2018 11:03:00 AM

Thank you Lawrence :) xomo!