Blues To Bluebells

The nervous young couple
    turned wedding bell blues
    into wedding bluebells
  They escaped from the dance floor
    and bought padded cells

  that no yells or screams can penetrate
    ~ returned just in time for orange bluebell cake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Delightful and witty as always Gershon with a touch of risque naughtiness!!! Fun! Thanks for sharing!
Wolf Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 7:07 PM
I weigh the odds, then take the risk anyway. ~ Overweight, lol
Fowler Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Deafening gw. :) laf
Wolf Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Keep listening, Linda. :) gw
Parker Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Can one have cake and eat it too...? Orange bluebell cake sounds oddly delightful. ~;o]
Wolf Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 7:10 PM
You know, that cake does sound pretty good, Arlo. Thanks!
Lawless Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 4:43 AM
OH THE BELLS, BELLS, BELLS, BELLS, BELLS, the tintinabulation of those bells, bells, bells, bells, bells
Wolf Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 7:11 PM
oh they moan, moan, moan, moan. Yawn...
Faulkner Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 8:31 PM
Very risque (if I'm reading it right) yummy sounding cake too ;)
Wolf Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Yummy is the password. Have yourself a couple of slices, Michelle...
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